|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ. -3/5 There were good amount of comments in the beginning, but as I read further, the comments became less and the same few people commented on it.
|- 10 ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴄᴏᴠᴇʀ. -5/10 I would suggest you to do some changes or just change the cover, honestly speaking then your cover is good but is not enough for the attraction that is needed in a cover.
- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴅᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ. -5/5 I liked the description, it is short but just because you have written it in a poetic way it's amazing.
|- 10 ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴛɪᴛʟᴇ 09/10 It is not rare and unique like I have seen a lot of books named 'One in a million'.But since it matches your story perfectly and with your poems that you have written in it so it is Good!
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴘʟᴏᴛ. -10/10 Hmm you have choosen to write a biography on hoseok,I appreciate sis and in an amazing poetic way, Fabulous.
|- ②⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴠᴏᴄᴀʙᴜʟᴀʀʏ. -20/20 I did not see any grammar mistakes and since you have written it like a poem or in a poetic way,so a great vocabulary is needed for that and you surely have good vocabulary skills.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs Fᴏʀ ᴘʟᴏᴛ ᴛᴡɪsᴛs ᴀɴᴅ ᴀᴛᴛʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ. -08/10 It surely attracts people,but since you have added poetry and all maybe only readers who likes to read those types of thing,I mean who likes to read poetries will have interest in your story. I am not telling you to change it though, it is amazingly beautiful.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴇᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴅᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴍᴇɴᴛ. -10/10 There was not much character development yet its okay and emotions oh my I literally have tears in my eyes when I read your story, like you have written all the chapters really perfectly with a perfect mixture of poetry and emotions.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴠɪᴛʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏғ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ. -09/10 Lack of Creativity can be seen in your story, and about the way of writting then it's quite good, you have the knowledge of using gaps and all.
|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏᴘɪɴɪᴏɴ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋ. -10/10
🆈🅾🆄🆁 🆁🅴🆆🅸🅴🆆 : Okay This is my first time reading a poetry like story Because I am never into poetries nor I understand them- But I am glad that I read yours, I liked it a lot. The poems that you have written are so magnificent and mesmerizing,they are beautiful sis,I even get emotional reading it. And the way, you have written hoseok's biography is fabulous, it is so poetic like that line "I can see the sky is blue,But I want it to be white. Making a spectrum of seven colours, with my bright Sunshine" Woah that hits right in the heart. And Your ending is amazing especially when you write "We are BTS ; not a phonemenol music sensation or a worldwide billboard artists, but seven gems for our blazing dreams" like seriously that was so so beutaeful, and the song which is yours I guess? is also good! Although everything is perfect in your story but not the cover so make sure to do some changes and all. You are really good at poetries,keep going author-nim!
Total : 90/100
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