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Until you come into my world, There was nothing but Darkness and gloom. My world was missing clouds and the sun and also the star and the moon. I never believe in magic...

"The marching clique is on the move, Trotting hooves the telltale of their rove. Can you hear the sound of the drums? Listen to the echo of their fierce hums? Your...

"Don't act so f*cking high and mighty! You're still Leslie. Stupid, naïve, pathetic Leslie who would beg for my attention. You would f*cking kiss my boots if I aske...

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~A possessive romantic love story~ Nandini Murthy, she is the bad boy's girl. Manik Malhotra, he is the good girl's choice. Two love sick teenagers. People judge them...

Hello Fellow Traveler, Welcome to Lavender and Pearls Book Club! Excited to have you here! The Lavender and Pearls Book Club is here to help fellow authors and their sto...

Ⲱⲉⳑⲥⲟⲙⲉ ⲧⲟ ⲧⲏⲉ Fσυя Pαятч Cσαlιтισи BσσкClυв, ⳽ⲉⲥⲟⲛ𝖽 ⲉ𝖽ⲓⲧⲓⲟⲛ. [2020] Ⲇⳑⳑ ⲧⲏⲉ ⲛⲉⲱ ⲅⳙⳑⲉ⳽ ⲇⲅⲉ ⲓⲛ⳽ⲓ𝖽ⲉ. Ⲱⲉ ⲏⲇⳳⲉ ⲥⲟⲟⲕⲓⲉ⳽ [Ⲟⲣⲉⲛ ⲇⲛ𝖽 Ⲇⲥⲥⲉⲣⲧⲓⲛ🇬 Ⲇⲣⲣⳑⲓⲥⲇⲧⲓⲟⲛ⳽]

برای همه ما لحظه هایی پیش اومده که داستانی که در حال خوندنشیم ؛ مزخرف ، تکراری و خسته کننده به نظر برسه. این کتاب جهتِ کمک به فن فیک نویس های عزیز و تازه کار، و کم...

So pretty much it's gonna start as them being little and they will meet somewhere, becoming the special place, meet each other almost every day, becoming friends, but so...

❝If you're from Africa, why are you white?❞ Status: [ ] open [ ] closed [x] on hold ( you can still request but it'll be a long wait! ) (#1 in rates as of 09/09...

[C F C U] ❝ 날 보고 첫마디가 𝘤𝘰𝘰𝘭, 𝘤𝘰𝘰𝘭, 𝘤𝘰𝘰𝘭 ❞ 𝚊 -𝚌𝚕𝚘𝚜𝚎𝚍- 𝚛𝚎𝚟𝚒𝚎𝚠 𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚙 « 𝚑𝚘𝚗𝚎𝚜𝚝 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚍𝚎𝚝𝚊𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚍 »

"ᴡᴇ ɢᴏᴛ ᴅɪғғᴇʀᴇɴᴛ sᴛᴀʀs ᴀɴᴅ sᴛᴏʀɪᴇs." ʟɪᴋᴇ sᴛᴀʀs, ᴇᴀᴄʜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴏɴᴇ ᴏғ ᴜs ɪs ᴜɴɪǫᴜᴇ! ɪ ʜᴏᴘᴇ ᴛʜʀᴏᴜɢʜ ᴍʏ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ sʜᴏᴘ, ɪ ᴄᴀɴ ʜᴇʟᴘ ʏᴏᴜ sʜɪɴᴇ ᴇᴠᴇɴ ʙʀɪɢʜᴛᴇʀ! :) sᴛᴀ...

STATUS: CLOSE FOR RENOVATION My name's Cale, your critic, and I will be giving you hardcore feedbacks to your story. Join this shop now if you want to cry for improvemen...

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What you need to know: 1. Must be your own work obviously 2. Everything I say is constructive criticism. I will be honest. (Here's a secret: There's no such thing as a p...

✎ ☕️ . . ⇢ ˗ˏˋ halcyon ˎˊ˗ ꒰ 🥀 ꒱ (adj.) calm and peaceful; happy, prosperous ____________ Hewwoo! Welcome to HALCYON. - Do you need new friends? - Promotion of book...

Wings of Fire OC Reviews! Not my original idea. (If you don't know what OCs are, they are "Original Characters") Also, yes, I'm aware - there are about two tho...

This story is about the faith struggles of a Muslimah born and raised in Nigeria. As it is a fact that not all muslims grow up in an Islamic environment. In fact, some p...