Seven Vows Part 1- Published

By shruthiravi13

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Sreedhar Varma at the age of 22 he thought he had everything. Pampered by a loving family, heartthrob of pre... More

Prologue
Destiny's surprise
The Loneliness
The Threshold
Broken Dreams
Reality Check
Memories
The Accusation
The Failed Mission Rescue
The Mirror
The Friendship
The Sleepless Night
The blooming love
The Guilt of a Mother
A Prayer
The Confusions
The Decisions
Thoughts
The Dance
The Dinner
The Drive
The Shopping
The Garden
The Cricket Match
The Dance Performance
The Breakfast
The Movie date
The Negatives
The Community Meeting
Janmasthami
The Pooja
Kuch Naa Kaho
Results
The Lunch
Poornima Patel
The Felicitation Ceremony
The Medal Varmala
Heart to Heart Talk
The Couple Talk
The Sarees
Mourning and Festival
The Plan of protection
The Jagratha
The Commotion
The Long Night
The Clash and the Celebration
The Trial
The Punishment
The Aftermath
Suman's duty , Support for family
The Feelings
Maryada ya Bandhan
The Fan girl, Mahima Das Case
The Durga
The College Gang, Outing
Back Home
Face -Off
The Notes
Dil Hai ke Maanta Nahi
The Invitation
The Questions
The Speech
The Threat, Evil Trio
The Hospital
Why Me
The Burn Marks
Counter Attack Strategy
A friend in need
Request for help
Aakash Varma
The Punishment
Repurcurssions
The Headaches
The Memorandum
Pain, Comfort, Elation
Voting and Aftermath
The News
The Dilemma
The Choice
The Shock
Search of Proofs
Information
The Questions
The Talk, The Tears
The Expose
Am I the same
The Raipur diary, Your Sister
The Truth
The Apology, The Breakdown, The Verdict
Maa-Beta
Economics of Marriage
Delicate Touch
Income Tax Raid, Desertation
The Colors
Your Sumi
Deepdan
Welcome daughter
A sister's question
The Doll
The Maha Sammelan, Maya
Free Passes
Indications
The Inheritance
Archies
The Tedy, Naina Rawat
Friends get together
The Charity Bash
The Insult
The Fight, The Deal
A Mother's advice
Catch 22, Full Story
Missing Sister
Accusation in MA , A death
Sarangi's pain
Nami's b'day, College Project
The MA meeting
Nomination, House Arrest
Inheritance Settlement, Delhi Invitation
The Interview
The Republic Day Parade
Nomination Troubles
Combine Study, Singapore Travel
Inheritance Papers, The dark Plan
Sarangi Wedding
The Cat fight, Gifts
Money Matters
Mahasivrathri
The Escapade
The Poison Culprit, Chulha troubles
The Murder
The Press Statement
The Warning
The MA election, Accidental Reaction
The Motive
The Lullaby
The Celebration, The Security
The Night Out
The Wedding Circus
The Advice, The Threat, The Love
Pichkari
The Computer
Tea Talk
The Fight, The Boards
Unveiling Retail Plan
She gave me a lot
Auspicious, The gift
April 7th
The Marriage Invitation
The Doubts
Corp Audit plan, Brahman Bhoj
A Plea
The Shradh
The Mess, The Topper
The Weapon
The Photos, Wedding gift
The Suhagan Pooja
The Interiors, The Tantrum
The Housewarming
On the Road
The Ajmer Stop over
Jodhpur
The Packet
The Values
Enforcement Directorate , Charge Sheet
The Purity
A Thorn
The Concern
Pre-Wedding Get together
The Thinking Room
The Sarcasm
The Luncheon, The School, The Complaint
The Discipline
Geeta Didi, Jodhpur Market
The Guidance
The Mehrangarh Fort
The Bangles
The Muhurat, Job offer
The Hope, The Solace
The Farewell, The Answer
The Welcome
Krishna Leela
The Assurance
The New hope
New beginnings
The Blackbox
The New Home
Bromance
The Temple Festival, The Packing
Insensitive Remarks
I wont leave you
For you daughter
What do you know
The Fire, The Tear
The Disaster Management
Suicide, CBSE Results
The Party
The Crack
The Shop Inauguration
Questions

The Decorations

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By shruthiravi13

Suman, Sreedhar, Vindhya, Vaishnav and Poornima were at the shop decorating it for the next day's inauguration. Everyone was in a good mood. Vindhya and Poornima were tying flower garlands at the entrance and at the sides of shelves. Sreedhar and Vaishu checked on the lighting arrangement and were also arranging the furniture inside the shop.

Suman was dressing up the two display mannequins in sarees. She had chosen richly fabric painted silk saree for one mannequin and embroidered cotton saree for the other. She was working day and night to complete the fifty sarees. In between she had to finish orders, take training in the army camp and also teach dance. Now she had relegated her dance classes to week ends only as she knew it was not possible to run it on week days also. One good thing that happened with her six month training in army camp was that she had got two women to support her in the shop.

Sreedhar was feeling happy as he arranged the furniture along with Vaishnav. Suman's parents along with her brother's family had come. Suman's mother was dotting on him and he hoped when she knows the truth, she will love him the same way. She had bought a big dabba of gajjar ka halwa for him.

Soon most of the work was done. Now only the sarees had to be arranged in the shelf and some small decoration arrangement in the steps and front of the shop.

" Sreedhar, you and Suman sit inside the shop and spend some time. Let us do the remaining work" told Vindhya.

Suman tried to protest but Vindhya and Poorni pushed Sreedhar and Suman to the designing area to the extend they slipped and fell together.

" Poorni, Vaishu turn this side. Don't spoil the romance " teased Vindhya as she dragged the kids.

Suman tried to get up, but the way they fell it was impossible without holding him. She held his shoulders and he supported her as they got up. Suman very much wished she could keep her head on his chest. Sreedhar just wanted to wrap her in his arms. But then they left each other quickly.

" Sreedhar I forgot to tell you something. "See this  Suman opened her handbag and took the Ganesha Key chain which now had the key of the shop.

Sreedhar took it from her hands not able to believe his eyes. He took the key chain from her hands " How, how did you get it Sumi. I thought you might never get it back".

" Maa gave Sreedhar" told Suman.

" Bhavani Aunty. Does she know " asked Sreedhar.

" Take it as Maa's blessing for our union Sreedhar. She doesn't know who gave it. But the way she talked I understood she knows it is given to me by the man with whom I have been in love. By giving me this she has indicated she wished to see me united with the man I loved. I wanted to tell her who it is , but then Papa came " told Suman.

Sreedhar gave the key chain back to her. " Sumi do you know how happy I am. Bhavani Aunty has given her blessings. This symbol of our love has come back to you. Everything will be alright" told Sreedhar and Suman could see he was crying. She gently wiped his tears smiling at him.


Naina tied the decorations for her second sister in laws wedding. Her mother in law came out.

" How long will it take you to tie the decorations. Simply eating food and not doing any proper work. Is this the way flowers are tied. There are no servants here. Finish it fast. There is more work to do. "

Naina nodded her head. Post Rawat's death things didn't go good for Naina and her mother. ED confiscated all the properties of Rawat, Bhaskar and Shyamlal. They took the haweli telling it was a benami property. Naina's mother in law made a big hue and cry of calling her a criminal's daughter and refused to have them at Rajat's house.

Since Rajat was a nice man, he spoke sternly to his mother that Naina is his wife and she will stay there. He made arrangements for her mother to be taken to a widow home with the help of a student who had worked for " Dignity for widow campaign". He spoke to some people, paid something called income tax on the deposit money and got the remaining money back.

But her mother in law ensured the money they got was in Rajat's name and not in her name. Rajat tried to reason out, but her mother in law was impossible. Now Naina had nothing and was completely dependent on Rajat for her survival.

Before the fiasco his one sister's marriage was done. Now with the remaining deposit money the marriage of her second sister in law was happening. Naina knew by the time her third sister in law was married there will be nothing left and they will have to live on the income from Rajat's kirana shop.

That meant more abuses from her mother in law. Naina gently touched her belly. She had to tell Rajat. A new life was on its way and she hoped it to be a boy. If not she knew her mother in law will not spare her.

" Chudayil not yet finished tying a flower garland. Finish it fast. You need to make Churma ladoo. Guests will be coming any time for Haldi." hissed her mother in law.

Naina closed her eyes. All she could see was Suman's hurt face when she had called her Chudayil in the party. Tears started flowing from her eyes and she knew there was none to see it as she went about doing the work. 

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