PERSONA 3 RED and BLUE ( COMP...

By Cosmos_Null

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RANK 1 MYSTERY RANK 1 PERSONA 3 PORTABLE human curiosity ... it's what brought us to where we are today . E... More

a new life
Shadows
The Dark Hour
Tartarus - part 1
Tartarus - part 2
Tartarus - part 3
I'm the leader
Heart of the samuria
Tennis under the sun
Brave hearts
School myths
Monorail madness ! - part 1
Monorail madness ! - part 2
Monorail madness ! - part 3
You're still students !
The clown
In love with a teacher - part 1
In love with a teacher - part 2
In love with a teacher - part 3
F.O.E - part 1
F.O.E - part 2
F.O.E - part 3
Akihiko Sanada-part 1
Akihiko Sanada - part 2
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 1
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 2
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 3
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 4
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 5
Fuuka Yamagishi - Part 6
Broken bonds
End of season 2
A good leader
Unanswered questions
Cyber Cupid
Master of hypnotisim - part 1
Master of Hypnotism - Part 2
Master of Hypnotism- Part 3
Master of Hypnotism - Part 4
Master of Hypnotism - Part 5
Recounciliation
The reason I fight
Distant hearts
Smile and everything will be fine
Yukari Takeba
Deep Breaths By The Shore
Laughter and Joy
Aigis - Part 1
Aigis - Part 2
Aigis - Part 3
Aigis - Part 4
Aigis - Part 5
A Persona for everyone !
A fog covered town
Amagi inn
Challenge
Velvet Bond - Part 1
Velvet Bond - Part 2
Impending danger - Part 1
Impending danger - Part 2
Trapped - part 1
Trapped - part 2
Trapped - part 3
Summer school
Summer festivale
Ken Amada- part 1
Ken Amada - Part 2
Ken Amada - Part 3
Ken Amada - Part 4
Ken Amada - Part 5
Ken Amada - Part 6
Ken Amada - Part 7
Koromaru
Crazy night
Harem - part 1
Harem - Part 2
a lonely soul
Junpei Iori - part 1
Junpei Iori - Part 2
Junpei Iori - Part 3
Chidori
Innocent Feeling
Social anxiety
Sleeping table
The culture festival - Part 1
The culture festival - part 2
Demifiend
Sick day shenanigans
a new day
Killer cheif - part 1
Killer cheif - part 2
Compassionate feelings
Joyous Night
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 1
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 2
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 3
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 4
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 5
Shinjiro Aragaki - Part 6
Grief
End of season 3
Last note
Conflict
Locked heart - part 1
Locked heart - part 2
Minako Arisato - Part 1
Minako Arisato - Part 2
Minako Arisato - part 3
Minako Arisato - part 4
Minako Arisato - Part 5
Minako Arisato - Part 6
Controversial photos - Part 1
Controversal photos - Part 2
Controversal photos - Part 3
Controvesal photos - Part 4
Velvet Reunion
The programming club -Part 1
The programming club - Part 2
Saori Hasegawa
Innocence - Part 1
Innocence - Part 2
Minato Arisato - part 1
Minato Arisato - part 2
Minato Arisato - part 3
Minato Arisato - Part 4
Minato Arisato - Part 5
RED AND BLUE - Part I
RED AND BLUE - Part II
RED AND BLUE - PART III
RED AND BLUE - Part IV
RED AND BLUE - Part V
Minako and Minato
The final block - Part 1
The final block - Part 2
The Future
The final battle
Mitsuru Kirijo - Part 1
Mitsuru Kirijo - Part 2
Mitsuru Kirijo - Part 3
Mitsuru Kirijo - Part 4
The new chairman
Ryoji Mochizuki - Part 1
Ryoji Mochizuke - Part 2
Ryoji Mochizuke - Part 3
Ryoji Mochizuke - Part 4
Kyoto - Part 1
Kyoto - Part 2
Deep breath in the hot springs -Part 1
Deep breath in the hot springs - Part 2
Faith
Entitled authority
Midnight stroll - Part 1
Midnight stroll - Part 2
Midnight stroll - Part 3
The Impossible Bond - Part 1
The Impossible Bond - Part 2
R E V E L A T I O N
TO BE CONTINUED ...
Calming moment
Neko-chan
fate of the world - Part 1
fate of the world - Part 2
Maiko Oohashi - Part 1
Maiko Oohashi - Part 2
Hope
Fleeting happiness
SEES
Strega - Part 1
Strega - Part 2
Strega - Part 3
Strega - Part 4
ANNOUNCEMENT
Secrets of the ice and snow
The final decision
Farewell , Ryoji
Velvet confrontation - Part 1
Velvet confrontation - Part 2
Velvet confrontation - Part 3
Margaret - Part 1
Margaret - Part 2
Margaret - Part 3
the Dying Young Man
Warm hearts
To be alive - Part 1
To be alive - Part 2
To be alive - Part 3
A trip to Niseko - Part 1
A trip to Niseko - Part 2
A trip to Niseko- Part 3
Prelude to the finale
The tower of demise - Part 1
The tower of demise - Part 2
The immovable object
The unstoppable force
Memories of you
T H E E N D
PERSONA 4 MYSTERIOUS MIST teaser
SECRET ENDING

the girl at the shrine

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By Cosmos_Null

Minako walked the streets of Iwatodai , streets that she had walked for months , and yet today they seemed unfamiliar to her . Sirens could he heard in the distance , people dazing and spacing out before regaining their consciousness at random . She could even see some people going insane and attacking bystanders . Despite hers and her friends' efforts , the world is slowly succumbing to panic and chaos by the presence of the Dark Hour . It was almost too much for her to see , and she hastened her pace away from the crowd .

Her feet led her to the stairs leading to shrine , even though she wasn't thinking about it . It was like deep down , she wanted a miracle to happen . She wanted to believe that everything she had lived through was a nightmare because she ate too many sushi in that party after they defeated the last full moon shadow , but sadly she was living through reality and she knew it . She shook her head , and wanted to leave , but then she noticed a certain blue-haired boy at the top of the stairs .

" Minato ! " she ascended the stairs toward him .


" oh ... hey , sister ... " Minato looked at her , he seemed very tired and conflicted

" What're ... what are you ... doing here ? " she struggled to find something to talk about

" well , a lot has been unraveled on us in one night . Our past came crashing down on us , and we were robbed off of our future " Minato clenched his fists in anger " in video games , this is called exposition dump ! I never liked it in games , and it's certainly no better here ! "

" Minato ... listen ... about ... about Ryoji ... ! " Minako started , but words seemed to fail her

" please , the last thing I want to talk about right now is wether we should kill or spare him ! " Minato impatiently interrupted her

" wh—what ... ? "

" I came here to clear my mind of the conflict , I don't want to be reminded of it , okay ? "

" then ... then ... oh ... " Minako mumbled to herself for a second , before nodding " right , sorry , I guess I'm not ready for that , either "

Their strained conversation stopped , and they just stood in front of the shrine . The horizon before them was covered by thick layers upon layers of rainy clouds . The two of them thought they should return to the dorm before it started raining , but before they could leave , they heard the sound of weak crying in the playground by the shrine . In front of a tree , stood a little girl that was sobbing sadly . The twins thought she had scrapped her knee , so they gently approached her .

" what's wrong , little girl ? " Minako gently sat in front of her " did you hurt yourself ? "

" my ... my ball ... " the girl sobbed , as she pointed at the top of the tree " Genta-kun kicked it very high ... and it got stuck in the tree ... and ... and ... I can't get it back ! "

" aww ... don't be sad ... " Minako gently wiped her tears " my brother here will buy you a new ball "

" I'm sorry , what ? " Minato glared at his sister

" that's ... that's not ... just any ball ... " the girl sobbed " stripped shirt gave it to me ! "

" stripped ... shirt ? " Minato imagined a floating sentient shirt buying her a ball " what ... ? "

" okay , I'll get it back for you ! " Minako said confidently

" you ... you will ? "

Minako took a few steps back , before rushing toward the tree and jumping at it . However , she couldn't force herself to climb it any further , and she fell back to the ground without getting the ball back . When she stood back up , she was met by her brother's frustrated glare .

" you do realize you're wearing a school uniform , which includes a skirt , right ? "

" oh ... right ... " Minako blushed " good thing we're alone here ... "

" anyway , I can probably climb it myself , if that's what we need to do ... "

" no , it was raining recently , so it's a little difficult to climb it ... " Minako had a bright idea " I know ! I'll boost you up , so you can get it ! What do you say ? "

It took a few tries , but in the end , they managed to get the ball . Minako happily gave the ball to the little girl , who silently accepted it . The little girl stared at the twins for a few seconds , as if she was contemplating something . Before they could ask her , she opened her mouth and spoke instead .

" mama told me that I shouldn't talk to strangers , but you're not strangers , right ? " the girl said , her tone becoming more and more cheerful as she seemed to realize what she was talking about " you're Cosmos and Null ! The heroes from my dream ! I'm Maiko , I'm so happy to meet you in person ! "

" what ... ? "  the twins looked at each other in confusion

" do you remember ? That nightmare in which I was kidnapped by monsters , and I they kept me in a dark tower , and you came to rescue me , right ? I was so scared , but you came and fought the monsters back with your friends using all those powerful attacks and everything ! You were amazing ! "

" dark tower ... monsters ... powerful attacks ... " the twins both came to the realization that this was the girl they had rescued from Tartarus the last time they explored it

" so are you two out on a date ? "

" a date ?! " the twins gasped , thankfully Minako realized what the little girl meant " actually , Maiko , we're not Cosmos and Null . We're siblings , see ? "

" siblings ? "

" yes , a brother and sister " Minato nodded " we're actually twins "

" I ... I see ... " the girl seemed to think deeply about what she heard from the twins " but I definitely remember you in my dreams , was it you or was it Cosmos and Null in my dream ? "

" hmm ... I dunno ... " Minako pretended to think about it , before saying " but we do love those two , and we used to idolize them and even role-play as them sometimes , so I guess that's the reason ... "

" what are you talking about , that's back when we were kids " Minato interrupted his sister , before shrugging " it probably was just a dream , one shouldn't eat too much before going to sleep "

" I'm not sure ... " Maiko seemed conflicted " I definitely remember you from my dreams ... you're good people , right ? "

" oh , definitely ! " Minako nodded " right , bro bro ? "

" hm ... well , yes ... " Minato couldn't just say no to the hopeful look in Maiko's eyes , not that he had any reason to .

" okay ! Then let's be friends ! "

" great ! " Minako happily replied " so are we going to play with your ball ? "

" actually , I don't think I'm going to play with it here anymore " Maiko preciously clutched her ball " if Genta-kun sees it with me again , he's probably going to kick it into the tree again "

" so Genta-kun is a bully ? " Minato crouched in front of little Maiko and said firmly and confidently " next time he messes with you , tell me , amd I'll kick all of his balls into the tree of the shrine , how does that sound ? "

" you ... you will ? " Maiko eagerly asked

" yes , by the time I'm through with that kid , he'll have no balls whatsoever ! "

" Minato ... I know you mean well , but mind your phrasing ! " Minako nervously remarked , before she hastily changed the subject " so ... uh ... what should we play ? "

" give me that ball , I'll show you something cool "

Minato started swiftly juggling the ball with his feet and knees , and sometimes with his head . He was so skilled at it , that Maiko was at awe as she watched him , her gaze fixated on the ball as if she was being hypnotized . Minako was so happy to see her brother entertaining Maiko , but she also wanted to join in on the fun .

" alright , it's my turn ! " Minako demanded

" you don't know how to play soccer , let alone doing tricks with the ball like that " Minato said while his eyes were fixated on the ball

" you underestimate me ! " Minako challengingly replied , before turning to Maiko " what do you say , Maiko-chan ? You do want to see Cosmos playing with the ball , right ? "

" oh , yes ! " Maiko nodded

" fine , knock yourself out " Minato gently passed the ball to Minako

" okay , here goes nothing ! " Minako tried to juggle the ball like her brother , but she ended up kicking so hard into her brother's face " oh no ! I'm sorry !"

" see what I mean ?! " Minato clutched his face both from pain and frustration " let's play something we can all enjoy "

However , the three of them began feeling cold water droplets falling on them , and they realized it was going to rain soon . Eventually , it was pouring outside , and the three of them took shelter in the bookstore . The old owners of the bookstore thankfully had a spare umbrella for them , so they lent it to Minako and she  managed to walk Maiko to her house along with her brother , before the two of them decided to go back to the dorm .

With the rain pouring outside , the tension in the streets seemed to dissolve . The crowds were dispersing into buildings , and people suffering from the apathy syndrome were either apprehended or taken into houses and hospitals . The calm streets almost made them feel like nothing was wrong . However , this calm was preceding a horrifying storm , a storm they could never hope to survive . They could only delay the inevitable end , the end of the world , that which cannot be avoided . The time they spent playing with Maiko was so innocently fun , that it almost made them forget the impending end , but now that they were alone , all they could think of was Ryoji's words .

" sis ... " Minato mumbled " I need to be somewhere ... "

" what ? " Minako turned to her brother , just as he began running into the rain " w—wait ! You'll catch a cold if you go in there ! "

" you go back to the dorm , I'll be back in no time ... " Minato hastened his pace , but as his sister grasped him by the wrist , he nervously and angrily shook her away " I said I want to be alone !!! "

" Minato ? " Minako looked at her brother in shock and confusion , his eyes were red and the rain soaked his face and clothes completely " are ... are you ... ? "

" it's ... it's the rain ... " Minato said in a breaking voice , and as his voice began to break , he angrily averted his eyes from his sister , before storming away

Minako stood in the rain , her hand tightly clasping the umbrella . Her lips shivered , and she began crying . She wanted to go to the dorm , but she ended up going to the hospital . In that lone room , Shinjiro seemed almost peaceful in his sleep , as if he was having a sweet dream . Minako looked at him , and then at the world outside through the window . Against her will , she found herself crying again .

" Shin-chan ... I don't know what to do ... " she sobbed " the world around us is falling apart ... we just learned that the Dark Hour cannot be prevented , and some powerful thing is going to erase humanity or something ... can you believe that it's all mine and Minato's fault ?! Minato is breaking under the stress , Aigis was severely damaged and they're still trying to fix her , and I'm too scared to say or do anything ... I... I even have ... "

" M—ina—ko ... " Shinjiro mumbled in his comatose state

" Shin-chan ?! Shin-chan ! I'm here ! Can you hear me ?!! " Minako started , but then she stopped and sobbed " n—no ! I still haven't saved the world yet ! I don't want this world to be what you see when you wake up ! I ... I don't know what I want anymore !!! "

Shinjiro didn't seem to respond after that , and Minako could only crouch by his bed and cry . His nurse entered the room to monitor his condition , and she saw Minako in that state . She gently sat by her side and placed her hand on her shoulder .

" I don't think he wants to see you like this " she said

" Yuzuru-san ... " Minako sobbed " I ... I want him to wake up ... but not like this ! The apathy syndrome , the end , people going crazy , this isn't what I want him to see ! "

" don't say that " for the nurse , Minako was an example of determination and conviction , so she couldn't bear to see her the way she was" aren't you the one who's going to set things right ? Wasn't that your promise , the one I hear you repeat to him whenever his condition worsens ? "

" I can't ... I can't do it ... " Minako sobbed " I promised him , I know I did , but I can't fulfill my promise ! "

" the girl who visits this patient wouldn't say these things " the nurse said confidently " you're the one who taught me to keep fighting , to keep believing . He's rooting for you , so don't let him down yet ! "

" Yuzuru-san ... " Minako looked at Shinjiro with her teary eyes

" for now , let me register your friends' current condition , then I'll treat you to a quick snack in the cafeteria . Let's have you take your mind off of things for now "

" r—right ... thanks ... "

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Well , it's good to be back . I hope I didn't keep you waiting for too long . First off , that ' to be continued ' thing ? I'll address it later , just give me some time , okay ?

Anyway , these upcoming parts are taking place near the end of the game , and I want them to convey a sense of despair . Persona 3 has what I think is the best end game events of all time , the idea that the final battle can't be won is such a powerful concept that , even though Nyx wasn't well foreshadowed before Ryoji , it still leaves a heavy impact on the story , more specifically if you self-insert yourself into it . I want these upcoming parts to convey that . That being said , the next part will hopefully be more lighthearted

Thank you for following this fanfiction , and I hope you stick with it until the end . You will not be disappointed ........... hopefully ......

Until we meet again , make sure to comment your thoughts about the unraveling events , and please consider voting for this part if you enjoyed it . Don't forget to give me your opinions regarding the changes I plan to make in Persona 4 , and I'll see you in the next part . Stay safe .

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