MaNan: Can I Love Her ?

By shivishina1

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This is a story of our beloved couple Manik and Nandini aka MaNan.... :-) let's see whether they can love... More

Prologue
CHARACTER SKETCH
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5-1
Chapter 5-2
Chapter 6-1
Chapter 6-2
Chapter 6-3
Chapter 6-4
Chapter 7
NOTE
Important Note
Chapter 8-1
Chapter 8-2
Chapter 8-3
Chapter 9-1
Chapter 9-2
Chapter 9-3
Chapter 9-4
Chapter 9-5
Chapter 9-6
Chapter 10-1
SORRY
Chapter 10-2
Chapter 10-3
Chapter 11-1
Chapter 11-2
Chapter 11-3
Chapter 11-4
Chapter 12-1
Announcement
Chapter 12-2
New Cover
SHOUTOUT
SORRY NOTE
Chapter 12-3
Chapter 12-4
NOTE
Chapter 12-5
ANNOUNCEMENT
SHOUTOUT
Chapter 12-6
Chapter 12-7
Chapter 12-8
Chapter 12-9
Chapter 12-10
NOTE & SHOUTOUT
NOTE
HAPPY HUG DAY-1
HAPPY HUG DAY-2
HAPPY HUG DAY-3
HAPPY HUG DAY-4
HAPPY HUG DAY-5
HAPPY KISS DAY-1
HAPPY KISS DAY-2
HAPPY KISS DAY-3
HAPPY KISS DAY-4
HAPPY KISS DAY-5
HAPPY KISS DAY-6
HAPPY KISS DAY-7
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-1
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-2
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-3
NOTE
NEW COVER
Chapter 12-11
Chapter 12-12
NEW COVER
Chapter 13-1
Chapter 13-2
SORRY NOTE
NOTE NOTE NOTE....
Hello...
Chapter- 13-3
Chapter- 13-4
Chapter- 13-5
Chapter 13-6
Chapter 13-7
Chapter 14-1
Chapter 14-2
Chapter 14-3
Chapter 15-1
Chapter 15-2
SHOUTOUT
Chapter 15-3
Chapter 15-4
Chapter 15-5
Chapter 15-6
Chapter 15-7
Chapter 16-1
Chapter 16-2
Chapter 16-3
Chapter 16-4
Thanks Giving, Important Announcements and Let's Chat
Chapter 17-1
Chapter 17-2
Chapter 17-3
Chapter 17-4
Chapter 17-5
Chapter 17-6
Chapter 17-7
Chapter 18-2
Chapter 18-3
Chapter 18-4
Chapter 19-1
Chapter 19-2
Chapter 19-3
Chapter 20-1
Chapter 20-2
Chapter 20-3
Chapter 20-4
Chapter 20-5
Chapter 21-1
Chapter 21-2
Chapter 22-1
Chapter 23-1
Grand Proposal (Last Chapter)

Chapter 18-1

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By shivishina1

Happy Rakshabandhan to all the brothers and sisters out there.. 

Thanku to each one of you for wishing me on my birthday and adding more memories to my birthday.. and for appreciating the work.. So..  here goes the update.. 

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(All woke up at 5:30. Manik and nandini opened their eyes together and in an instant their eyes moved towards each other , both smiled seeing each other. Manik pecked her forehead and nandini pecked her cheek. They got up and went to their room to get fresh. All got ready and  checked out from hotel and started their journey. In between they were talking and by the time nandni slept, they reached manik's home at pune. All admired the mansion as they have come there for the first time. As they all were tired they decided to sleep for some time.)

IN MALHOTRA MANSION (IN PUNE):

(Manik took nandini in his arms in bridal style and came inside and whispered in her ears lovingly.)

M: Welcome home jaan.. (Nandini smiled in sleep making manik's smile widen. He lovingly pecked her forehead and snuggle her close to himself.)

(Seeing him all servants came and greeted him and his friends. He greeted them back. All were surprised seeing change in manik as he was calling elder servants as kaka and others also with respect and somewhere all knew that the girl in his arms is the reason for it as they saw that he was holding nandini with full love and care.)

(Manik told servants some things and asked them to show rooms to his friends. His dad is not in home. He has went to attend some meeting. Manik also don't give a damn to it as he know he will not come to see him once as he will be busy in making money for him. Navya and Mukti took one room. Cabir and harshad took another. Manik took nandini in his room.)

(When he entered his room.. he smiled looking towards sleeping nandini and spoke lovingly.)

M: Finally.. today this house has become home as you have stepped in it jaan.. I love you so much.. (He pecked her forehead lovingly.)

(Then he put her on bed comfortably and then slipped beside her and slept holding nandini tightly in his embrace after pecking her forehead and cheek lovingly. As nandini have slept in the journey, so she woke up at 10. She saw herself in manik's embrace and smiled seeing manik sleeping like a baby. She pecked his cheek softly and recognizing her touch manik smiled in sleep. Nandini smiled and then look around and saw herself in some room and she saw that room was filled with manik's photographs and realized that she was at manik's place at pune. She admired the beauty of his room. She slowly entangeled herself from manik and manik not feeling nandini's warmth and touch slowly started stirring in sleep. Nandini immediately patted his head lovingly to make him sleep again and smiled realizing that he could feel her even in his sleep. She doesn't want to wake him up as he may be tired from all the driving and also he has woken up early in the morning. When she realised that he is in deep slumber.. she slowly took her pillow and put her scarf on it which has her fragrance which she was wearing today and put that pillow in manik's embrace. Feeling nandini's fragrance in that pillow manik immediately holded it in his embrace and smiled and snuggled to it and slept peacefully. Nandini smiled seeing this and then pecking manik's forehead, she got fresh and then came out of his room. She was admiring the mansion when one of the servants came to her and asked.)

S: Mam.. kuch chahiye apko? (Nandini got startled and asked.)

N: Ji?

S: Do you need anything mam? (Nandini said politely.)

N: Pls.. don't call me mam.. (Servant became confused and asked.)

S: Ji?

N: Yes.. don't call me mam... ap mujhse bade hain..

S: Fir kya bulayun main apko?

N: Mera naam nandini hai you can call me by my name.. (He said all startled.)

S: Nhi.. nhi.. main apko naam se kaise bula sakta hoon.. ap chotte sahab ki friend hain..

N: Toh thk hai ap mujhe beti bula lijiye.. but mam nhi.. (Servant smiled for getting surety of the reason of change in manik's behavior and blessed the girl standing before him in his mind.)

S: Okay beta.. Thk hai? (Nandini smiled.)

N: Ji..

S: Toh bataiye bitiya.. kya lengi ap? Kya chahiye apko?

N: Nhi kaka.. kuch bhi nhi chahiye..

S: Nhi bitiya.. aise kaise.. itna time ho raha hai.. breakfast ka time hai.. bataiye kya lengi ap khane mein..

N: Nhi kaka.. abhi kuch nhi..

S: Nhi beta.. don't hesitate..ap batao kya chahiye apko.. Manik baba ne specially bola hai.. Humesha vo akele hi aate hain yahan.. first time apne friends ke saath aaye hain yahan aur unhone specially kaha hai ki unke kisi bhi friend ko kisi bhi tarah ki koi problem na ho especially apko toh bilkul bhi nhi.. He has seriously told us ki ap jo maange.. apko mile aur apko koi problem na ho yahan aur ap puri tarah se comfortable ho.. So pls bataiye..

N: Acha thk hai.. ek coffee milegi..

S: Ji bilkul.. main abhi lekar aata hoon..

N: Chaliye kaka.. main bhi chalti hoon apke saath..

S: Thk hai bitiya.. chaliye..

(They went to kitchen.)

IN THE KITCHEN:

N: Kaka.. ghar mein aur koi nhi rehta?

S: Bade sahab rehte hain na?

N: Bade sahab?

S: Manik baba ke papa..

N: Ohh... toh abhi kahan hain vo? Ghar par nhi hai?

S: Vo toh kabke office chale gaye.. Humne unhe phone kiya tha batane ke liye par vo ek meeting mein busy hain..

N: Ohh.. Humesha itne hi busy rehte hain vo?

S: Haan.. ye toh roz ka hi schedule hai unka.. morning jaldi chale jate hain.. fir raat ko late ghar aate hain.. (Nandini asked being confused.)

N: Apke manik baba se milne bhi nhi aate kya vo? 

S: Unke paas itna time kahan.. (Servant spoke in a flow but then he realised what he spoke and immediately told nandini.)

S: Sorry bitiya.. pls ye baat baba ko mat batana.. Achanak se mooh se nikal gayi.. Agar unhe pata chala toh vo bhut gussa karenge ki maine ghar ki baat kahin aur ki.. (Nandini said politely.)

N: Kaka relax.. ap tension mat lijiye.. Mani ko ye baat pata nhi chalegi aur agar pata chali bhi toh bhi vo kuch nhi kahega.. because I am his family.. Ap tension mat lijiye bas aage se dhyan rakhiyega aur hamare baaki friends ke saamne ye baat na aye.. Thk hai?

S: Ji bitiya... hum dhyan rakhenge..

S: Ye lo bitiya.. apki coffee..

N: Thanku kaka..

N: Wowww... kaka... it's damn yummy.. Thanku.. (While drinking coffee.. it's like her dimag ki batti jali.. and she immediately asked kaka..)

N: Kaka.. yahan aas-paas kahin colours milenge kya? (Servant asked being confused.)

S: Colours? Kaunse colours bitiya?

N: Vo jo holi pe gulaal lagate hain hum.. Vo colours..

S: But abhi toh holi ko bhut time hai bitiya..

N: Haan kaka.. I know.. vo mujhe thode colours chahiye the.. toh milenge kya? (He started thinking and then spoke.)

S: Colours.. Yahan aas-paas...... Arey haan.. hamare paas mein hi ek shop hai.. uske paas shayad colours mil sakte hain.. (Nandini got excited.)

N: Toh kaka jaldi se mangwaiye na..

S: Haan.. (He called another servant and told him.)

S: Suresh.. vo hamare ghar ke paas jo grocery shop hain na.. jo holi pe colours bhi rakhta hai.. vahan se colours puch kar aa.. Aur agar huye na.. toh bhut sare different-different colours ke packet lekar aana..

SU: Ji.. (With this he went to bring colours.)

(By the time nandini was drinking coffee and admiring the mansion, Suresh came with the colours and gave to nandini and she thanked them.)

N: Thaku kaka.. Thanku bhaiya ki ap ye colours lekar aaye..

SU: Arey koi baat nhi mam..

N: Pls.. don't call me mam..

SU: Huh?

S: Tum inhe didi ji bulalo.. Thk hai bitiya?

N: Ji bilkul..

SU: Thk hai didi ji.. (Nandini smiled and he went away. Then nandini turned towards kaka and asked him.)

N: Kaka.. mere liye ek aur kaam karenge..

S: Haan.. bolo bitiya..

N: Zara ek minute chalenge mere saath..

S: Haan chalo bitiya..

N: Kaka cabir bhai aur harshad kis room mein hain? (He took them to boy's room.)

S: Ye lo bitiya.. ye raha unka room..

N: Kaka ek baar ap andar jakar dekhiye ki vo thk hain.. (He frowned and asked.)

S: Matlab? (Nandini said being embarassed.)

N: Vo... I mean.. Matlab they have worn their vests and track pants.. u know.. (He understood and spoke.)

S: Ohh.. ruko bitiya.. main dekhta hoon.. (He went inside and saw them and then came outside and told nandini.)

S: Haan bitiya.. vo bilkul thk hain..

N: Thanku kaka.. ap yahin rukiye.. main abhi aayi..

S: okay..

(Nandini went in the room and saw cabir and harshad sleeping. She get all aww on seeing them sleeping like a baby especially cabir.)

N: Cabir bhai bilkul ek chotte-masum se baby ki tarah lag rahe hein sote huye.. (Then she realised for what she has come there.) Nandini.. jaldi kar.. iss se pehle ki ye dono uth jayein.. jaldi kar.. (She took some colours in her hand and covered cabir's face with them making him look like a monster cartoon. She laughed lightly seeing him looking so cute.)

N: Cabir bhai ki ek picture le leti hoon.. he is looking too cute.. (Then she turned towards harshad.)

N: Ammm.. Harshad pe lagayun ya nhi? Kahin usse bura lag gaya toh? Kya karun.. Nhi nandini.. it's okay.. He is also like a brother to me aur itni masti toh chalti hai.. (She applied colour on his face and took his photograph too and came outside and then asked kaka.)

N: Kaka... mukti aur navya kis room mein hain?

S: Chalo bitiya.. main le chalta hoon..

S: Ye raha unka room.. 

(Nandini went inside and does the same with mukti and navya and clicked their pics too while kaka was standing outside. Then she came outside and thanked kaka.)

N: Thanku kaka.. ab ap ja sakte hain..

S: Ji bitiya.. (Then nandini went to manik's room.)

IN MANIK'S ROOM:

(Nandini saw manik lookig all cute while sleeping. She went close to manik and sit beside him.)

N: Aww.. mera baby kitna cute lag raha hai sote huye.. but abhi masti time.. (She put colours on his face and then caressed his hair lovingly making him wake up.)

N: Chalo mani.. uth jao ab.. breakfast ka time ho raha hai.. (He immediately put his head on her lap and tried to snuggle in her tummy but she stopped him from doing so as it will spread the colour on her dress. Manik frowned feeling that and opened his eyes and raised his brows in confusion and asked her.)

M: Kua huya? Why you stopped me?

N: Nhi vo.. (Before she could give any excuse.. they heard navya shouting. They immediately stood up and ran to girl's room. Nandini knew the reason and she giggled under her breath not to show manik. Then.. they hear all four of them shouting..)

NEAR THE STAIRCASE:

(As navya woke up and looked towards mukti.. Seeing her face.. she started shouting which broke mukti sleep and also started shouting seeing navya's face.. This broke cabir and harshad sleep.. and they started shouting seeing each other's face.. All four immediately ran from their room shouting bhoot... bhoot.. and bumped with each other and started shouting more loudly seeing each other. Hearing their shout.. all servants got startled and ran towards them. By the time manan also reached there and seeing that manik also started shouting..)

M: Ahh.. bhoot.. angel bachao mujhe.. (He immediately hided behind small nandini but then realized that nandini might be feeling scared too and then turned her towards him hiding her in his protective embrace and hiding himself in her embrace. Nandini felt blessed that even in such a situation he didn't forgot her.)

(All four started shouting bhoot seeing each other and manik is murmuring bhoot-bhoot in nandini's embrace. Then after few seconds they realised that nandini and all the servants are laughing. Then they stopped shouting and manik broke the hug and then they look each other face keenly and realised that it's colour and they are their friends only.. and realised that it's nandini's prank. Manik looked towards servants and they immediately stopped laughing.. Then manik turned towards nandini and seeing her laughing freely smile touched his lips too and soon he too started laughing and seeing that all started laughing.. )

(All servants too laughed and then blessed them and then moved from their to give them their space after blessing nandini for giving a life to the house by making all smile and laugh so much.)

(Manik holded nandini and took her in his embrace and spoke lovingly.)

M: Mera bachaa itna shararati ho gaya hai haan.. Mera beta (Cabir spoke scolding nandini.)

C: Sachi bhut shararati hoti ja rahi hai ye.. subah-subah aisa prank koi karta hai kya.. Mujhe sach mein laga ki mere samne bhoot baitha hai..

H: Toh tu bhi koi bhoot se kam nhi lag raha tha..

NA: Mata rani.. pata hai hum kitna darr gaye the..

MU: True that.. (Nandini spoke between her laugh.)

N: Haha.. look... look at your faces..

MU: Acha... abhi batate hain.. guys attack..

C: Yeah.. (Before they can attack, nandini immediately hugged manik and hided herself in his embrace and spoke.)

N: No no guys... I have allergy from these colours.. (Listening this manik immediately hided nandini more in himself and spoke.)

M: Stop right there guys.. koi angel ke paas nhi ayega.. (Cabir and Mukti spoke being concerned for her sisiter.)

C: Doll.. agar tujhe allergy hai colours se toh why did you pull that stunt.. agar tujhe kuch ho jata toh..

MU: Haan.. tu thk toh hai na.. (Nandini felt guilty for making them concerned and before manik could speak anything for hr concern, she broke the hug from manik and spoke calming them and cheering them.)

N: Guys.. I am fine.. relax.. Acha ek group selfie toh banti hai.. (Cabir immediately spoke.)

C: No.. no ways.. aisi shakal ke saath selfie.. kabhi nhi.. (Nandini smirked and spoke.)

N: I already have clicked your individual pics.. (All became shocked listening to that.)

C: What?

N: Yeah.. ye dekho.. haha... kitne cute and funny lag rahe ho sab..

MU: Chotti.. this is not fair.. delete kar inhe..

C: Haan..

N: No ways.. Ye main delete nhi karne wali.. aur ab hum group selfie lenge..

C: No.. (Now, nandini knew what to do.. his ultimate saviour all the time.)

N: Mani.. kaho na inhe.. (Manik spoke to others rather ordered them.)

M: Guys.. meri angel ne bola hai.. toh selfie zarur hogi.. Chalo lo selfie ek saath..

C: Haan toh tu le na selfie.. hume kyun bol raha hai..

M: Cabir tu aaraam se manega ya maar khakar manega..

C: Tu mujhe dara raha hai.. (Manik smirked and spoke.)

M: Kyun tujhe darr lag raha hai..

C: Acha baba.. le raha hoon na selfie.. aise dhamka mat..

C(murmured under his breath): Ye sach mein pura ka pura majnu ban gaya hai.. (Mukti laughed listening to it.)

N: Kya hua muku?

MU: Arey kuch nhi.. chal aaja selfie lete hain..    

(Then they all started taking selfies in various poses making all funny faces.)

Thanku itshappieme It was your idea to add scene where nandini paint their faces.. I have tried to incorporate is as good as i can.. Hope you liked it..

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