MaNan: Can I Love Her ?

By shivishina1

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This is a story of our beloved couple Manik and Nandini aka MaNan.... :-) let's see whether they can love... More

Prologue
CHARACTER SKETCH
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5-1
Chapter 5-2
Chapter 6-1
Chapter 6-2
Chapter 6-3
Chapter 6-4
Chapter 7
NOTE
Important Note
Chapter 8-1
Chapter 8-2
Chapter 8-3
Chapter 9-1
Chapter 9-2
Chapter 9-3
Chapter 9-4
Chapter 9-5
Chapter 9-6
Chapter 10-1
SORRY
Chapter 10-2
Chapter 10-3
Chapter 11-1
Chapter 11-2
Chapter 11-3
Chapter 11-4
Chapter 12-1
Announcement
Chapter 12-2
New Cover
SHOUTOUT
SORRY NOTE
Chapter 12-3
Chapter 12-4
NOTE
Chapter 12-5
ANNOUNCEMENT
SHOUTOUT
Chapter 12-6
Chapter 12-7
Chapter 12-8
Chapter 12-9
Chapter 12-10
NOTE & SHOUTOUT
NOTE
HAPPY HUG DAY-1
HAPPY HUG DAY-2
HAPPY HUG DAY-3
HAPPY HUG DAY-4
HAPPY HUG DAY-5
HAPPY KISS DAY-1
HAPPY KISS DAY-2
HAPPY KISS DAY-3
HAPPY KISS DAY-4
HAPPY KISS DAY-5
HAPPY KISS DAY-6
HAPPY KISS DAY-7
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-1
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-2
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY-3
NOTE
NEW COVER
Chapter 12-11
Chapter 12-12
NEW COVER
Chapter 13-1
Chapter 13-2
SORRY NOTE
NOTE NOTE NOTE....
Hello...
Chapter- 13-3
Chapter- 13-4
Chapter- 13-5
Chapter 13-6
Chapter 14-1
Chapter 14-2
Chapter 14-3
Chapter 15-1
Chapter 15-2
SHOUTOUT
Chapter 15-3
Chapter 15-4
Chapter 15-5
Chapter 15-6
Chapter 15-7
Chapter 16-1
Chapter 16-2
Chapter 16-3
Chapter 16-4
Thanks Giving, Important Announcements and Let's Chat
Chapter 17-1
Chapter 17-2
Chapter 17-3
Chapter 17-4
Chapter 17-5
Chapter 17-6
Chapter 17-7
Chapter 18-1
Chapter 18-2
Chapter 18-3
Chapter 18-4
Chapter 19-1
Chapter 19-2
Chapter 19-3
Chapter 20-1
Chapter 20-2
Chapter 20-3
Chapter 20-4
Chapter 20-5
Chapter 21-1
Chapter 21-2
Chapter 22-1
Chapter 23-1
Grand Proposal (Last Chapter)

Chapter 13-7

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By shivishina1

Thanku so much guys for all the love you showered on last chapter.. i wasn't able to reply to your beautiful comments but believe me.. i read each and every comment of yours and i love you a lot guys for loving the story so much... :-) Thanks a ton guys.. :-)

Many of you tried to guess the song.. Thanku so much for trying.. Thanku Love_Manan_123 akritiguptap  NehaSawhney9  HeyItsAriba  Pooja7702  Manan_0711  Sapna02 Haleema248  PanktiMaru You all tried but the actual song is written below.. I am sorry.. actually it was my fault only that i didn't gave you the situation.. You all commented manan songs which are full of happiness and love but according to the situation in the story.. i needed some soft love song on manan... i hope i did justice with the song selection.. 

Thanku lilmsfirefly your option of song was correct.. :-)

Thanku so much guys for trying to guess the song.. You all made my day yesterday by filling the comment box with different manan songs.. i know we all are manan fans.. so, their each and every thing is close to our heart and manan songs are just love.. thanku so much.. :-)

I am sorry if i missed any name by mistake..

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(Nandini was continuously looking at manik with a beautiful smile. Manik seeing her admiring him ask her the reason.)

M: Kya, aise kya dekh rahi ho?

N: Dekh rahi hoon.. how i got so lucky to have you in my life.. (Manik smiled beautifully and spoke while cupping her face.)

M: Lucky tum nhi.. lucky main hoon.. jo tum meri life mein ho... meri life ko humesha peaceful and happy banane ke liye.. (nandini nodded in no and spoke.)

N: Nhi manik.. I am lucky.. Agar tum nhi hote.. toh mera ye dard kabhi mujhse alag hota hi nhi.. kabhi mujhe sukoon milta hi nhi.. (Manik spoke smilingly.)

M: Iske liye bhi tum hi reason ho.. (Nandini frowned listening to it and manik spoke further lovingly.) Agar tum mujhe heal nhi karti.. mujhe sukoon nhi deti... toh shayad main bhi kabhi tumhe heal nhi kar pata kyunki main apne hi dard mein khoya rehta.. (Nandini knew that manik will never take credit but she also knew that what manik has done for her means alot to her and he deserve all the credit. so, she further spoke.))

N: Mani.. ye har koi janta hai ki tumhare liye sabse pehle dusron ki khushi aati hai.. khaas kar ke tumhare friends and loved ones ki.. Tum itne saal pain mein the par fir bhi tumne humesha vo kiya jisse fab5 humesha khush rahe aur unhe koi pain na ho.. Tumne vo sab kiya jiss se unhe kabhi koi takleef na ho... Toh m sure ki agar maine tumhe heal nhi bhi kiya hota.. toh bhi tum mujhe dard mein dekhkar mera dard dur kar hi dete.. So, i am lucky to have you... (Manik knew that he can never win from his angel, his nandini, but he also knew that he is the most luckiest having nandini in his life because what nandini has done for him, no one can ever do that. So, accepting his defeat and proving his point at the same time, he spoke.)

M: Haan.. shayad tum thk keh rahi ho.. par ye bhi utna hi sach hai ki agar tum mujhe heal na karti, mujhe rishton ki ahmeit na samjhaati.. toh shayad main itne acche se tumhe kabhi nhi samjha pata.. U have made my life happy and content.. So, i am lucky to have you.. (But our nandini is being stubborn.. Manik ki princess hai.. toh stubborn hona toh banta hai... hehehe.. so, she spoke with a cute pout.)

N: No... i am more lucky.. (Manik knew his princess very well and her stubbornness too..., so, he brought an excellent thought.)

M: Okay.. okay.. let's don't fight on who is more lucky.. We both are lucky to find each other and have each other.. Right? (Nandini smiled widely and nodded her head in yes.)

N: Right.. (Manik smiled seeing nandini smiling.) (They both were looking each other with a beautiful smile. Nandini spoke after few seconds.)

N: Mani...

M: Hmmm... (Nandini spoke with little hesitation.)

N: Can i please ask you something? (Manik immediately cupped her face and spoke lovingly.)

M: Angel, tum jaan ho meri.. U are my princess... Ur every wish is my command.. u don't have to ask.. u have to just order.. i will fulfill each and every wish of yours.. (Nandini smiled widely and asked babyishly.)

N: Sacchi...? (Manik pecked her nose lovingly and spoke.)

M: Mucchi.. (Nandini smiled widely and hugged him which manik reciprocated equally and ask smilingly in the hug only.)

M: So, tell me what my princess wants? Kya chahiye meri angel ko? (Nandini snuggled more in manik's embrace and spoke.)

N: Mani.. main bhut saalon se sukoon se nhi soyi.. please mujhe sula do..  (Though manik felt bad that his nandini is craving for some peaceful sleep but at the same time he is happy that nandini asked him something for the first time that too herself and more importantly, she asked him for some peace which he is all ready to give her as for him nandini's happy and content smile is everything. Nandini's peace matters the most to him and he promised himself that he will always keep her happy. He didn't want to see her in any stress. He want her to be happy always.)

(He broke the hug slightly and took nandini in his arms in bridal style. Nandini snuggled more in his embrace making manik smile widely. He smilingly took nandini to the bed and made her lay on bed very softly as if she is made up of some delicate material and then himself laid beside her sideways. With one hand he started caressing her forehead smilingly making her smile and she immediately holded his other hand in her hands and entangle her fingers with his fingers and put the entangled hand on her heart as if getting peace from them. Manik smiled widely seeing her this gesture.)

(Manik closed her eyes with his other hand and spoke lovingly in her ears.)

M: Sleep meri jaan.. M here only. Have a peaceful sleep my angel... (Nandini smiled widely listening to manik's words full of love and assurance.)

(Then, he uncovered her eyes but nandini didn't open her eyes. She was all ready to go into a peaceful slumber. Manik started singing softly while caressing her forehead and hairs continuously. His other hand was enangeled with nandini's on her heart. He started singling.)

Hmm.. hmm...

Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum (Manik was smiling looking at nandini's smiling face. He was admiring her all the time. He took their entangeled hand near to his lips and kissed nandini's knuckles softly making nandini smile more.)

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm.. hmmm.. (Manik was all the time looking at nandini admiring her face caressing her forehead. He not for once looked away from her face. Nandini's smiling face was giving manik happiness and a feeling of satisfaction that his nandini is happy and is at peace and he needs nothing more than that.)

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum (Manik was singling the song from his heart. He meant each and every word of the song. It was like he was singing the song only and only for nandini and it was true. He sang this song for the first time and promised himself that he will sing this song only and only for nandini always. This song was like a mirror to his heart depicting his feelings for nandini because he knew befor nandini coming into his life, he doesn't know the actual meaning of life and now, nandini being in his life.. he need nothing else than nandini. Now, nandini is his everything and he can't live without nandini for a second even. Nandini is his life, his reason to breathe, his heartbeat, his soul. Nandini is manik's everything.)

Hmmm... hmmm..

(By the end of the song, nandini was fast asleep with a beautiful smile and content look adorning her face holding manik's hand near to her heart and manik smiled widely seeing nandini smiling and content.) (Manik started speaking looking towards nandini and admiring her smiling face.)

M (to himself): I promise my angel, main kabhi tumhare chehre se ye smile jane nhi dunga. Main tumhari har wish puri karunga or tumhe hamesha pamper karunga. Main tumhe humesha apna baccha banakar rakhunga.. mera chottu sa baby... (He smiled widely and bend towards nandini's face and kissed her forehead softly making nandini's smile widened.)

(Then, he slowly took his hand from nandini's hold and covering her properly with quilt and again kissing her forehead stood up from the bed slowly making sure not to disturb his princess's sleep and moved towards the door but before going out, he once again turned and smiled seeing nandini's smiling face and then with content face, he moved out of the room closing the door behind softly and moved downstairs with a beautiful smile on his handsome face.)

I hope the selection of song was correct according to the situation... 

Vaise toh all manan songs are beautiful and i love all of them but this one is my most favourite manan love song... :-) :-)

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