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#184 Lover: A Book Of Heartbreaks

Lover etc by @MmTt11

Be careful with your choice of words and what sounds best in each situation.

Some grammar issues but I pointed those out.

Be careful with commas.

Apart from that, again, a lovely set of poems.

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