Critiques [CLOSED]

#159 It Had To Be You

It Had To Be You by @chhavi4778
Chapters 3-5

I found parts kinda cliche. Like the whole locker thing.

I would use colloquial language. Please see my comments on that.

Thoughts in italics.

Commas before names.

Just one question mark will suffice XD.

Overall, a great continuation. Not much to pick up on! Well done :))

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