The Depths of my Heart by @Riodejenerio
Not a lot to say about this. As always the poetry was beautiful and you really conveyed a lot of emotions just through a few lines.
Loved the half rhyme in the one at the end.
The formatting was sometimes inconsistent. Like some stanzas were indented and others weren't. Maybe it's something to do with wattpad and what happens when you copy it.
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