#148 Thief Of Stolen Hearts

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by xanabanana66x

by xanabanana66x

Thief Of Stolen Hearts by @siramontiguez

Thoughts should be in italics with no speech marks.

Chapters were a good length. Long enough to contain sufficient information but short enough to not bore the reader.

Your style of writing was good for the genre.

A bit confusing with the part in the Thief's POV. For a minute I thought the Thief was Samantha. Was that done on purpose?

Overall, a great start. Not much to say! All good!

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