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#87 Solipsistic Heartbreaker

Solipsistic Heartbreaker by @sophhjade

I did 5 chapters instead of 3 because these were so short.

Great formatting with all the indents. It made all of the poems look neat.

I'm intrigued as to your reason for using lower case.

With poetry, every word and every punctuation mark needs to have meaning. Many people think writing poetry is easy but doing it well is actually the hardest form of writing there is. Keep working on it and make sure every comma, every full stop adds meaning to the poem.

Consider making each of the poems contribute into a story. I've only read the first 5 poems so I don't know if you've done this but I think it would be a really clever touch.

Overall, a beautiful set of poems! I like how they all link to one main theme too.

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