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#149 Aftertaste

Aftertaste by @kenopsiac

I wouldn't put asterisks at the end of parts since we know it's the end. That means there's more of a focus on the words ending the chapter than anything else.

Chapters were short which was good. A unique style and voice too.

Loved the plot twist with Lea and what she actually did to Claire.

Very sentimental. I really had a strong connection with Lea - and that's something that's hard to achieve.

Overall, really well done! This was so interesting that I'm going to keep reading it of my own accord!

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