Not the Fairest by beautifulpoetic_
I really would love a bit more description - I found the prose a little blunt.
Dialogue was sometimes not formated right. Make the dialogue tag a lower case.
I loved the twist in the retelling - really clever.
Great characters - including Snow. You made her such a brat and I really really didn't like her. :)
Overall, a really good and original start. Keep it up!!
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