Chloe's Book Reviews {CLOSED/ HIATUS}

The untold story of the pack

Author: @livykittykat

Chapters: 6 chapters

Genre: Non-fiction/ Teen fiction

Specific: Everything

Cover-

The cover is pleasing to the eye and can attract readers.

Blurb-

The blurb is fine, and I don't see any problems. Just remember to use capitals for words at the beginning of a sentence.

This example just requires a question mark.

"or what they are like"

My suggestion...

"or what they are like?"

Grammar/ Punctuation-

(Chapter One)

There wasn't anything too major. Just remember to add question marks on questions, so we know the character is asking something.

For example,

"Olivia how are we going to leave the pack house if the boys are downstairs!"

My suggestion would be...

"Olivia, how are we going to leave the packhouse if the boys are downstairs?"

Character Development/ plot –

I like the style in which you chose to write the book. I like that the readers can also ask questions to you and the characters. It's a unique style.

A suggestion would be to indicate in some of the chapters that the following is mature and can be triggering due to the vulgar language. I don't easily get offended, but it can be quite triggering in chapter five with the flamboyant statements.

Overall enjoyment-

I'm sorry it's a very short review. You only have six chapters, and two are dedicated to the cover, and the others are very short.

I do like the approach that you are taking as it's different, although personally, it's not the type of book I would read.

I'm sure somebody would like to read it though.

Keep writing. ✿ 

If you have any questions, just let me know.

Feel free not to take my suggestions, but if you do, I hope you find them useful.

Thank you for letting me review your book. Please check "The untold story of the pack" if you've got time.