Marrying Atlantis

Marrying Atlantis

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Jane Rose (the cookie monster) By Keira000 Completed

When plain Jane, Aubrey finds a guy burried in the sand, she naturally helps him. He thanks her by kissing her which throughs her right off, not having been kissed, like ever. Forgetting her towel she returns only to be lured into the water and kidnapped by the same guy who now reveals to have a tail. She doesn't remeber the trip down, but after a pink florescent bath she finds herself in the new underwater world. Which is really cool, until the mention that she is this guys wife to be. Not only that she is no longer the plain jane from Topside but is seen now as the 'Temptress' marrying the No.1 most eligible bachelor in Atlantis. Will the sudden attention faze the shy halfling as she tries to return to her homeland

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I don't know how I managed to rate this +13.  And I dont know how to fiix it. It is more borderline G/PG.

Finally, an average girl that's actually average, not a 'plain jane' with lustrous hair and curves that go on for days and of 'perfectly average income' but somehow wears Gucci shoes and Chanel No. 5.
You could say... he was BEACHED!
                              
                              *BADUMPTSSS*
                              
                              I.. I'll be in the corner...
Muffin_luv Muffin_luv Apr 03
I always have more than one fish, and my fish are stupid, so they always jump out of the tank, or if they are really hungry, they switch to cannibalism. Then die and end up in my toilet.
Alyzzzzle Alyzzzzle Apr 01
^same but also I wouldn't mind being with some hot daddy and get a tail
'Pushing me to the sand' 
                              
                              FINALLY a MC that follows her stranger danger instincts even when he's hotter than a tin can on the roof.
A towel, a mean I'm not a critical reader but you could've  said something like a necklace from your mom or something  fam