Marrying Atlantis

Marrying Atlantis

522K Reads 16.2K Votes 35 Part Story
Jane Rose (the cookie monster) By Keira000 Completed

When plain Jane, Aubrey finds a guy burried in the sand, she naturally helps him. He thanks her by kissing her which throughs her right off, not having been kissed, like ever. Forgetting her towel she returns only to be lured into the water and kidnapped by the same guy who now reveals to have a tail. She doesn't remeber the trip down, but after a pink florescent bath she finds herself in the new underwater world. Which is really cool, until the mention that she is this guys wife to be. Not only that she is no longer the plain jane from Topside but is seen now as the 'Temptress' marrying the No.1 most eligible bachelor in Atlantis. Will the sudden attention faze the shy halfling as she tries to return to her homeland

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I don't know how I managed to rate this +13.  And I dont know how to fiix it. It is more borderline G/PG.

kikiLuv16 kikiLuv16 Mar 02
Sooo shes not pissed at all to be pretty much kidnapped and turned into a half fish? No? OK then? 😓😫
happy-unbirthday happy-unbirthday Dec 07, 2016
why would you leave if there was someone who was stuck in the sand and you could help like honestly
May I just say that you have the book with the most tags I have ever read ?
                              
                              Thats not a bad thing though just wanted to mention it since nobody else had 😝
Ships_sailing_high Ships_sailing_high Oct 10, 2016
Heeeey my name is Ava I hope this girls not evil or something
Frozenxstar Frozenxstar Aug 21, 2016
You know that you don't really need the towel and besides why would your brother let you go alone at night like this? ☹️☹️
truelovebeliever33 truelovebeliever33 Sep 23, 2016
I get my goldfish at the carnival (they're only supposed to last a few weeks max) and I've had them for close to 15 years