Marrying Atlantis

Marrying Atlantis

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Jane Rose (the cookie monster) By Keira000 Completed

When plain Jane, Aubrey finds a guy burried in the sand, she naturally helps him. He thanks her by kissing her which throughs her right off, not having been kissed, like ever. Forgetting her towel she returns only to be lured into the water and kidnapped by the same guy who now reveals to have a tail. She doesn't remeber the trip down, but after a pink florescent bath she finds herself in the new underwater world. Which is really cool, until the mention that she is this guys wife to be. Not only that she is no longer the plain jane from Topside but is seen now as the 'Temptress' marrying the No.1 most eligible bachelor in Atlantis. Will the sudden attention faze the shy halfling as she tries to return to her homeland

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I don't know how I managed to rate this +13.  And I dont know how to fiix it. It is more borderline G/PG.

why would you leave if there was someone who was stuck in the sand and you could help like honestly
Nope. That towel is gone forever. You just gotta get a new one.
Heeeey my name is Ava I hope this girls not evil or something
Frozenxstar Frozenxstar Aug 21
You know that you don't really need the towel and besides why would your brother let you go alone at night like this? ☹️☹️
I get my goldfish at the carnival (they're only supposed to last a few weeks max) and I've had them for close to 15 years
Flutegal Flutegal Aug 18
So true. My cousins goldfish lasted 5 weeks before it committed suicide and jumped out if the tank to be squished by my grandmas feet