Breaking Eden - (rough draft)

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Breaking Eden is being finished!
Book Information
Welcome to Year of the Author
Chapter List/Word Counts
Author's Note
Part One: The Ghost Girl
1- Officer Hamlin (4/20/2019 Edit)
2 - The Ghost Girl (4/20/2019 edited)
3 - Almost 4 Weeks Later (4/20/2019 Edit)
4 - Behind the White Curtain (4/20/2019 Edit)
5 - I'm Nobody! Who Are You? (4/20/2019 Edit)
6 - Remember The Past (4/20/2019 Edit)
7 - The Promise (4/20/2019 edit)
8 - The Peace Within Darkness (4/20/2019)
9 - In Limbo (4/21/2019 edit)
10 - The Pen (4/21/19 Edit)
11 - Choices (4/21/19 edit)
12 - Eden begins... (4/21/19)
Part two: When Declan met Eden
1 - Welcome to Harvey's (2/7/2021 update)
2 - A Brief History of Harvey's Burlesque Theater (2/7/2021 update)
(Bonus Chapter) Eden's Dance (2/11/2021 update)
3 - An Introduction to Declan Payne (2/17/2021 Update)
(Bonus Chapter) A Diamond In The Rough (2/17/2021 Update)
4 - Harvey Cuts A Deal (2/17/2021 Update)
5 - Diamonds are a Girls Best Friend (2/18/2021 Update)
6 - Harvey Puts His Foot Down (2/18/2021 New chapter)
7 - Their First Meeting... (2/23/2021 update)
8 - Declan Needs A Release (3/4/2021 update)
9 - Follow The Leader (3/14/2019 update)
10 - Red Right Hand (3/16/2019 Edited)
11 - The Grind (New Chapter 3/14/2019)
12 - The Darkness (New Chapter 3/16/2019)
13 - The Light Within Darkness (3/17/2019 New chapter)
14 - Declan's Fantasy (3/17/2019 NewChapter)
(Bonus Chapter) Hurt Feelings (New Content 3/23/2019)
15 - Two Girls, One Dance (Part 1) (3/23/2019 New Content)
15 - Two Girls, One Dance (Part 2) (2/23/2019 New Content)
16 - Declan's Release (3/24/2019 New Chapter)
17- A Peek Into The Past (3/30/19 New Content)
18 - Silver Lining (3/30/2019 New Chapter)
19 - The Job Offer (3/30/2019 New Content)
Part Three: The Kidnapping of Eden Burrows
1 - Arriving In Style (7/12/18 update)
2 - The Fourth Knock (7/13/18 update)
3 - Stranger Things To Come (7/14/2018 update)
4 - D is fo Dominatrix (7/16/18 update)
5 - How Eden Got Her Groove Back (7/17/18 update)
6 - Little Truths (7/18/18 update)
7 - Where Did Declan Go? (7/19/18 update)
8 - We Got to Get Out Of This Place (7/20/18 update)
9 - Ballroom Boredom (7/21/18 update)
10 - An Introduction to Harold Humphrey (7/22/18 Update)
11 - The Slap Heard Around The World (7/23/18 New Chapter)
12 - Ima Drowned You In That Tub (7/23/18 New Chapter)
13 - Diamond Cuts A Deal (7/23/18 New Chapter)
(Bonus Chapter) Choose Your Own Kidnapping
Option #1 - Rude Awakenings (7/25/18 New Chapter)
Option #2 - The Next Morning (7/26/18 New Chapter)
Option #3 - After Thoughts (7/27/2018 New Chapter)
Part 4: The Doctor Is In
1 - The Dark Place (4/13/19 Edited)
2 - Liars and Questions and Tests, Oh My! (8/2/18 New Chapter)
3 - Blood Letting (8/4/18 New Chapter)
4 - Declan's Examination (8/5/18 New Chapter)
5 - A Beautiful Disaster (8/6/2018 New Chapter)
6 - Eden's High Escape (8/7/2018 New Chapter)
7 - Eden's New Room (8/7/2018 New Chapter)
8 - Declan's Arrival (8/11/2018 New Chapter)
9 - The Painted Woman (8/21/2018 New Chapter)
10 - Welcome To The Family (8/23/18 New Chapter)
11 - Last Night Visitors (New Chapter)
12 - A Lesson In Punishment (New Chapter)
13 - Breaking Free (New Chapter)
14 - Declan Saves The Day (Bonus Chapter)
Part Five: Medical Ward Round Two
1 - Back So Soon? (New Chapter 9/7/2018)
2 - Here Today, Gone Tomorrow (New Chapter 9/8/2018)
3 - Rewards and Punishment (9/8/2018 New Chapter)
4 - The Next Morning ( New Chapter 9/8/2018)
5 - Declan's Last Nerve (9/9/2018 Bonus Chapter)
6 - The Contract
Part Six: The Rules
1 - Refusing To Eat (9/14/2018 New Chapter)
2 - Fifth Day with no Food (not edited)
3 - Rules are made to be broken (not edited)
4 - The Contract part two (not edited)
5 - 8:59 pm that night (not edited)
6 - Introduction to Phase One (not edited)
7 - The Past That Haunts (not edited)
Part Seven: Training Days
1 - Eden's First Lesson (not edited)
2- Declan Comes Home Early (not edited)
3 - Dance For Me (not edited)
NANOWRIMO
4 - In The Bathroom (not edited)
5 - A Lesson With Darius (not edited)
6 - Declan Cleans Eden Up (not edited)
Part Eight: Finders Keepers
1 - The Stepford Slaves Part 1 (not edited)
1 - The Stepford Slaves Part 2 (not edited)
2 - The Master of Foxhounds (not edited)
3 - Into The Garden (not edited)
4 - The Stables and The Pitchfork (Not Edited)
5 - Jude in the Bedroom (not edited)
6 - A Close Call (not edited)
7 - After The Rose Garden (not edited)
8 - The Secret Affair (not edited)
10 - We Got Ourselves a Winner (not edited)
Part Nine: Eden's Punishment
1 - Blood for Blood (part 1) (Not Edited)
2 - Blood For Blood (Part 2) (Not Edited)
3 - The Black Rose Flogger (Part 1) (Not Edited)
4 - The Black Rose Flogger (Part 2) (Not Edited)
5 - The Oil of The Beast (Part 1) (Not Edited)
6 - The Oil of the Beast (Part 2) (Not Edited)
Part Ten: 30 Days of Solitary
1 - Day One (Not Edited)
2 - The Magic Trick (Not Edited)
3 - Back In The Closet (Unedited)
4 - You Gotta Wake Up the Beast (Unedited)
5 - Day four/Ben's Visit (Unedited)
6 - The Act of Manipulation (Part One)(unedited)
7 - The Act of Manipulation (Part Two) (Unedited)
8 - Day seven/ Ben's story (Unedited)
9 - The Bet (Unedited)
10 - A Simple Plan (Unedited)
11 - The Truth Comes Out (Unedited)
12 - Day fourteen (Unedited)
13 - The Test (Unedited)
14 - Sofia's Story (Unedited)
15 - Back in the closet still day 14 (Declan's POV) (not edited)
16 - Day 20/Where is Ben? (unedited 9/2/20)
17 - Day 21/The Letter (unedited 9/2/20)
18 - Day 25/nighttime (unedited 9/2/20)
19 - Day 30/One Day more (unedited)
Part Eleven: The Pleasure in Payne
1 - Ben's Punishment
2 - Ben's Reward (not Edited)
3 - Eden's First Orgasm
4 - A Fight Between Enemies (unedited)
5 - A contract and a submittal (unedited)
6 - A study of pain and pleasure (unedited)
7 - A Deeper Connection (unedited)
8 - The Next Morning (unedited)
9 - Therapy for the Wicked (Not Edited)
10 - One Hand. One mouth. (Unedited)
Part Twelve: Obedience Training
1 - The Chair (unedited 9/24/20)
FAN ART CENTRAL
Final Author's Note
What would you like to see happen?
Sound Track

9 - The Winner Takes All (not edited)

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9 - The Winner Takes All

***Ben's POV***

Ben headed up stairs, wondering how long it would take for Eden' to make it upstairs, if at all, and went to his room.

Time past slowly as he lay silently in bed, his gaze fixated on the intricate ceiling designs. Bittersweet sunlight filtered over him, warming his otherwise chilled body. He was always cold in the mansion, save for when he was in bed, preferable with Master or someone of his choosing.

His thoughts drifted and settled on an image of Eden. The new girl, the one who upset their way of life in more ways than one, yet left a mark on him. His fingertips settled on the bridge of his nose and a small grin settles on his lips.

He was drawn to her, not because of her looks; he's been with prettier girls, but because of her ill-natured defiance at every given turn. Eden was different from the others, a strong willed rebel that would be difficult to break. Yet, as he imagined Eden's current state, the cracks were clearly starting to show in her strong willed façade.

A groaning floorboard outside her bedroom door made him sit up. Footsteps hurried down the hallway. Ben cracked the door and spotted Jude pulling Eden into her room and quickly shut the door, locking it.

He crept from his room, listening for other footsteps as he mad his way down the hallway towards Jude's room. A hard thump against the door made him jump back like a scared cat. But the sounds of muffled moans almost made him laugh.

You're a crafty one. He rested his head against the cool wood and listened in on their intimate moment. What are you two up to in there? His hand rested against the doorknob and he resisted the urge to try to open it.

The moaning came much louder than before and Ben would be lying if he said he wasn't having a physical reaction to the dirty thoughts rushing through his mind.

Footsteps echoed down one of the hallways, snapping Ben from his thought. He rushed around the nearest corner and slipped into a hallway closet that was packed with cleaning supplies and various assortments of bedding.

When the footsteps carried on, Ben cracked the door to find Declan head away, most likely towards his room to wait out the rest of the hunt. Then all was quiet.

Jude's door opened. More footsteps filled the hallway and grew faint in the other direction. Eden was heading back towards the stairs.

"Back so soon? Don't tell me you've given up already." Declan hadn't gone to his room after all. He caught Eden in the Hallway. Ben's win was being threatened. He wanted to win the hunt. Not to win the role of punisher but to show Declan his worth. Ben wanted Declan to praise him for his job well done and perhaps reward his good deed in private.

He needed to win.

Ben cracked the closet door, waiting to strike. When Eden rounded the corner, he reached out, clamped his arm around her mouth to silence her scream and dragged her backward into the darkness before shutting the door tight.   

                  His arm snaked around her waist and held her tightly against his chest. To be honest, he hadn't thought about what he'd do once he got her in here. His only thought was to make sure she remained quiet. 

Eden struggled against him. Her panicked scream was but a muffled cry. Ben held his hand over her face, tightening his grip. "I'm not going to harm you but you must stop making noise. You'll lead him here." His breath was light against her ear.

Eden nodded under his hand and Ben released her, even thought everything in his body told him otherwise. He stepped away from her; afraid she'd strike out and hurt him with her fists, but the space was tight and there wasn't much room.

"Please don't hit me." Ben held his hands up in front of him, as though protecting his face from any sort of blow.

Declan's footsteps faded and disappear altogether. For once, they were alone, hiding in the dark like a couple of children playing a bizarre game of hid and seek. 

"Put your hands down." She batted Ben's arms away and once Eden had a clear shot she slapped him hard across the face.

"What was that for?"

"You-"

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Ben made hit move. He grabbed Eden's face and kissed her, backing her up against the folded sheets and towels. She didn't resist him. Instead her ran her hands through his hair and kissed him back with such passion his heart felt full.

Eden broke the kiss long enough to ask, "What are you going to do to me?"

"Kiss you for eternity." Ben panted against her parted lips, only to kiss her again. "I've wanted to do that the moment I first saw you at the ball."

"Is that so?" Eden pulled back. "So what happens now that you've won the fox?"

"Celebrate at little longer before I take you to Declan."

Eden's voice faltered. "What are you going to do to me then?"

"Please don't be afraid."

                  "It's hard not to be. But I can try."

Ben pressed his lips against hers, whispering words of understanding. "We can work with that."

"Can you tell me what my punishment is so I can try to prepare myself for it?"

"I don't know. Declan will decided that. But if I have my choice it won't involve pain."

"He'll use you again to try to do just that. All Declan does is hurt me." Eden tensed up and Ben tried to hold Eden but she stepped back. "He's going to have you rape me too. Isn't he? I don't think I can handle that." Her voice was no longer a whisper and Ben could tell she was on the verge of some sort of attack.

"Please keep your voice down." He pressed his over her mouth. "I don't think it's that kind of punishment."

She pried his hand off her mouth. "And if it is? Then what?"

"I've already told you that we don't have choices. We do what we're told like good little-" He thought of the exact words she used to explain what they were.  "Stepford Slaves was it?" 

Eden laugh was nothing more than a little puff of air against his palm. "That's what I called you all."

"I promise to go easy on you. Whatever punishment he makes me carry out know this. I would never willingly do anything to cause you harm."

Eden nodded in the darkness. "Then take me to Declan and claim your prize."

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