Kuch to hai Darmiyan -REPRISE

Door Ssdevan

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This story is based on show Balveer returns .It starts from the time when Timnasa got all the keys and red st... Meer

Chapter 3
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chaptet 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
Chapter 25
Chapter 26
Chapter 27
Chapter 28
Chapter 29
Chapter 30
Chapter 31
Chapter 32
Chapter 33
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40
Chapter 41
Chapter 42
chapter 43
Chapter 44
Chapter 45
Chapter 46
Chapter 47
Chapter -48
Chapter 49
CHAPTER 50
CHAPTER 51
Chapter 52
Chapter 53
Chapter 54
Ch 55
Chapter 56
Chapter 57
Chapter 58
Chapter 59
Chapter 60
Chapter 61
Chapter 62
Chapter 63
Chapter 64
Chapter 65
Chapter 66
Chapter 67
Chapter 68
Chapter 69
Chapter 70
Chapter 71
Chapter 72
Chapter 73
Chapter 74
Chapter 75
Chapter 76
Chapter 77
Chapter 78
Chapter 79
Chapter 80
Chapter 81
Chapter 82
Chapter 83
Chapter 84
Chapter 85
Chapter 86
Chapter 87
Chapter 88
chapter 89
Chapter 90
Chapter 91
Chapter 92
Chapter 93
Chapter 94
Chapter 95
Chapter 96
Chapter 97
Chapter 98
Chapter 99
Chapter 100-Darmiyan
Chapter 101
Chapter 102
Chapter 103
Chapter 104
Chapter 105
Chapter 106

Prologue

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Door Ssdevan

Hot dusty breeze is blowing on the streets of the city , marking start of the month April . Students are in the schools , working men and women are working in their respective offices , Housewives and old man are in their respective houses , relaxing as the afternoon sun  is heating earth.

In a deserted place, some kilometres away from Bharat Nagar , something is shining ,lying on the deserted place of the city which is surrounded by some trees from two direction while there is a valley in one direction whereas it is connecting to a road from another.

Some red rays is emitting from that object, which starts spreading in all directions .Suddenly two people appear there,in front of the shining stone.

"Hume der ho gayi"Said Vivan looking at the stone with utterly disappointment.All of their efforts have became useless .They lost when they thought that they won.He looks at his partner ,Balveer ,who is looking around without speaking anything.

"Kya hua Balveer?"Said a voice as someone come in front of them between woods."Kaafi dukhi lag rahe ho"She said looking at him with smirk "Tumhari itni saari jeet ka kya fayda jab ant me tumhe itni buri tarah harna tha"She said looking at him Victoriously as he looks at her furiously."Timnasa ke khilaf khade hone ki tumhari galti ki saja ab masoom  dharti wasion ko milegi.48 ghante!!48 ghanto me dharti pe jivan ka naamo nishan khatam ho jayega"She said looking at the shining red stone.

"tum to dharti per raaj karna chahti thi na Timnasa.Phir isse kyu barbaad karna chahti ho"Said Vivan angrily as well as helplessly.His mother ,his sister ,all of his friends ,his society, everyone is in danger and he is not able to do anything.

"Chahti thi, Vivan"Said Timnasa looking at him with"per tumhare partner ne issi dharti ko bachane ke liye kitni baar meri yojnayo ko Vifal kar ke mere samman ko chhot pahuchayi hai.Ab iske liye , tumhare partner ko dard dena to banta hai"She said sweetly looking at Balveer ."Inke liye tumne kitni baar apne jaan ki parwah nhi ki thi .Ab Apne aankho ke samne , apne logo ko marte hue dekho.Aur ye soch kar pal pal maro, ki Tum mar kar bhi inhe nhi bachha sakte."She smiles looking at Balveer.

Balveer signals Vivan to go while Vivan looks at him shocked.Are they giving up that easily?Does all life of Earth is going to end in just two days?Tears make his vision blur as he disappear from there with Balveer.

In Veer lok

Balveer is sitting on a high throne which is placed the centre . In front of her several fairies are sitting ,Vivan is sitting beside him on throne which is smaller than throne of Balveer , while shaurya is standing near feet of Balveer.(Shaurya is just an adviser)

"Aaj Maine aap sab ko kisi yojna ya kisi nirnay ke vishay me charcha ke liye bulaya hai"Said Balveer in loud voice which is enough to reach in the ears of the last person sitting in the row."Aaj ek pariwar ka mukhiya hone ke naate Mai apne pariwar ke sadasyon se baat karne aaya hu"He speaks further."Aaj Tak aap sab ne har pareshani aur har musibat ka samna bahut hi himmat ke saath Kiya hai . Bahut baar humne apno ko khoya, bahut baar hum tute  per phir bhi har baar hum haar ke darwaze se jeet ke laute "He said looking at them proudly."Aur hum ye issliye nhi kar paaye kyunki maine aapka netritav kiya , balki issliye kar paye kyuki aap sab ne mera saath diya ,mujh per aur mere har nirnay per Vishwas rakha.Hum issliye kar paye kyuki har baar aap sab ek dusre ke saath khade the."He said looking at each face"Mere hone se na hone se aapke ekta ki Shakti per koi prabhav nhi parta.Mai rahu ya na rahu ,per jab tak aap sab saath hai ,aapka ek dusre pe aur apne netritva per Vishwas hai to aap sab har ek mushibat se surakshit hai"Said Balveer looking at everyone which makes everyone confused.Why he is speaking like that but no one speaks anything.

"Kabhi bhi kisi  bhi mushkil paristhiti ne ,mere in shabdo ko humesha yaad rakhiyega ."He Said."Ab aap sab dharti per jaa kar waha ki logo ki madat kijiye .Vayu pari ,Dharti per pran Vayu ko niyantrit rakhne ki zimmedari aapki hai."He said looking at Vayu pari ."Jwala pari dharti ke garbh me jo Lava hai wo bahut asthir ho gaya hai .Aap usse hone wale Vinash ko kam se kam karne ki koshish kare "He said looking at Jwala Pari and then looks at Pani pari "Aapko jal ke star ko kabu me rakhna hoga .Aur Masti pari aur dhwani pari aap dono pashu pakshiyo ke beech santulan banana hoga .Dhyan rahe unhe dharti me ho rahe pariwartan ke vishay me andaza nhi hona chahiye.Maa ,aap,Vivan mai aur Ananya dharti ke logo ke beech me  panic spread karne se rokenge"He said

In sometime everyone leaves from there except Balveer and Vivan.

"Pariya kab tak tabahi ko rok payengi partner"Said Vivan who very well know that this all efforts is just temporary solution..

"Unhe sirf 48 ghante tak rokna hai.48th hour khatam hone se pehle ,Timnasa ke jeet ka sapna bhi khatam ho jayega"He said looking at him with victory smile.

"Matlab aapke paas koi plan hai"asked Vivan cheerfully.

"Timnasa ne hi suggest kiya hai"He said chucking while Descending from his throne and coming towards Vivan.

"kya plan hai.?"He asked looking at him surprised while he stands up.

"Plan btane se pehle kuch aur kehna chahta hu" said Balveer holding Vivan's shoulder taking deep breath."Chhote ,Jab mai tumse mila tha to mai sach me  bahut tension me tha.Ye soch kar mera uttradhikari aisa hai"He said chuckling "per tumne waqt ke saath ye sabit kiya hai ki tum iss zimmedari ke kabil ho .Aaj tak tumne jaise apni zimmedariya nibhayi hai mujhe umeed hai ki aage bhi waise hi nibhayoge.Per Vivan kabhi bhi in Zimmedaariyo ko khud ko badalne mat dena . Humesha aaise hi hasta hua shaitan sa Vivan hi rehna."He said with smile.

"Aap aaise kyu bol rahe ho partner"He asked looking at him confused.

"Vivan"He paused looking at him gathering courage to tell him the truth "Ye sab mai issliye bol raha hu kyuki ab mai tumhare Saath nhi rehne wala "He said with smile.

"aap sath nhi rehne wale . Kaha jaa rahe ho aap"asked Vivan thinking why he has to leave him suddenly.

"Timnasa ke lal ratna ko nast karne ke liye, mai meri puri Shakti ko ek ratna ka roop doonga aur phir uss ratna ko Timnasa ke lal ratna ke samip le jaunga jisse wo nast ho jayega."Said Balveer.

"Per isse to aap powerless ho jayenge partner."said Vivan looking at him shocked

"Sirf powerless nhi chhote lifeless  bhi"He said casually as if he is talking about the weather but his words are enough to shatter Vivan."Dono ratno ke nast hone se mai aur Timnasa dono ka jivan nast ho jayega."

"Aap majak kar rahe ho na partner" said Vivan with shaking Voice "ye phir ye aapka ek aur plan hai."He asked question but it sounded by like statement."Hai na.Jaise aapne memory loss wala plan bnaya tha.Waisa hi koi plan hai.Ha,aapka plan hai"He is sure in himself ."Please ,partner mujhe bataiye na .Mai kisi se kuch nhi kahunga .Mai acting bhi ek dum mast karunga.per please mujhe sach bta do na"He said unaware of the tears which is running down on his cheeks..

"Koi plan nhi hai chhote.Tumhari kasam"Said Balveer feeling guilty for Vivan's condition and shattering slightest hope of Vivan.

Vivan stammers back and fall on his throne unable to handle himself.

"Chhote , please mere liye  ye mushkil  mat bnao."Said Balveer helplessly looking at Vivan's condition.

"Nhi, nhi nhi"Said Vivan wrapping his arms around him."Mai aapko jane nhi dunga."He made his grip tight  "Mai aapko kahi nhi jane dunga "

"thik hai ."Said Balveer and Vivan looks at him unbelievably."tum kahoge to nhi jaunga."Vivan looks at him feeling relaxed but his next word bring him into quagmire."per Mai nhi gya to sab chale jayenge.Karuna ji , Khushi , Dadaji, tumhari paltan, har koi.Choose kar lo Kaun chahiye tumhe sirf mai ya mere alawa baaki sab."

Vivan looks at him shocked.How can he choose?He close her eyes as he recall his mother's face , his sister smile,his grandfather's talks ,his friends banter and on other side he recalls how he meet Balveer,all those time when he save him,taught him to think about others before himself.

His hold looses as he looks down crying.

"Dharti per bada hona ka mauka Sab ko milta hai Vivan.per aaise bahut kam khush Naseeb hote hai jinhe dharti ke liye marne ka mauka milta hai"He said looking at him with calm smile."Aaise aashu baha kar , meri iss khushi ko kam mat karo"He said wiping his tears."Aur ye baat sirf hum dono ke beech rehni chahiye"He said sternly while he nodded .

So how was the chapter?

Character sketch

Dev Joshi / Balveer - Leaves in Bharat Nagar . He doesn't consider Karuna as her mother .Have same relation with Vivan as in my previous story of Kuch to hai  Darmiyan. Loves Ananya and is aware about her feelings but doesn't admit his feelings.

Ananya- Leaves in Bharat Nagar with her mother .She is neighbour and best friend of Dev .Loves Dev and is aware about his feelings  but doesn't expresses her  feelings for her as he doesn't want to admit his feelings.Have same relation with Vivan as in my previous story of  'kuch to hai Darmiyan'

Vivan-  Son of karuna. Neighbour of Dev and Ananya.

Author's Note

This story starts with that scene when Timnasa gets the  four keys and mighty  stone.Some part of the story coincide with the show and some from my story of 'Kuch to hai Darmiyan ( Season 1 and 2) like Vivan's Relation with Devanya .Dev's and Ananya 's Past but those things are not focus of this story and hence will not be written about that .I may mention some events in the story from  that reference.

There is some changes in the back scenes from the show.Balveer never died and comes back as a soul ( I really don't like that track) Ray and Balveer are brothers and both are aware from it  but still Ray hates Balveer for Same reason as in my previous Book.

Balveer 's Parents are Dansh and Dipti who are dead There is no significant  role of Shaurya.

Vivan was the hidden power who has killed Timnasa and Timnasa comes back ( same in the show)  as shown in the show but Devaki is not his mother.In this story Vivan will not  know  about his relationship with Dev and Ananya.

Also Bhyamar didn't die in that 'Antim yudh'.

Some Devanya  Note

For Dev his duty is everything. He believes in love but thinks that it is not made for him .His past forces  him to think that whoever will become a part of his life will suffer and hence he doesn't want any family.
After meeting with Ananya he starts falling for her .He was very well aware from Ananya's feeling toward Nakabposh but he thinks that it is just infatuation. So After Timnasa's death he as Nakabposh told her that he is going away .
When Ray came in her life he starts getting insecure .when Ananya got to know about Nakabposh' identity She distant herself from Ray and then he realises that he too have developed some feelings for her . So he starts distancing himself from her. He doesn't ignore her but he stops giving her importance.

Ananya loves Nakabposh and after knowing about Dev's identity her love doesn't changes but she never expresses her feelings because she knows that Dev doesn't want that .She knows Dev's feelings  but also knows that he is running away from her and  his feelings .

So how was the chapter?

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