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The Emo, Or The Prep? *emo prep arranged marriage*

The Emo, Or The Prep? *emo prep arranged marriage*

344K Reads 3.2K Votes 36 Part Story
Alexis Long By alexis_rene Completed

The Emo Or The Prep?  *Emo Prep Arranged Marriage*
Emilee Morganstern has a good life.  She has a big crush on her best friend, Dayton Robertson.  The crush falls down when she meets her arranged marriage husband, Trayton Doss.  Being with Trayton makes Emilee realize that she didn't have a crush on Dayton anymore; she was in love with him.  Although she did love Trayton, she wanted to be with Dayton.  Then something happens to Dayton, something horrible.  Emilee helps Dayton be where he's supposed to be, and goes on with her life.

Cincinatti94 Cincinatti94 Apr 18, 2014
Okay, awesome story, but seriously, you really need a different style of writing. The way the story is written is just really annoying. I promise I'm not trying to be rude either. Just trying to give some advise.
asyak88 asyak88 Oct 20, 2013
I love the first part but the links are a little annoying- Dont get me wrong your writing is amazing!!
Lol wow I don't think any teenager would expect their parents to be telling them that they have to sleep with another teenager in the same bed as them
DracoNako DracoNako Apr 21, 2013
The formatting is screwed up, and that's your main issue. But there are so many finer issues in this that I wouldn't know where to start.but you NEVER.... EVER put links in the middle of your story. Please, read this over and FIX IT, cause for the love of Azphel... it's bad
okay so far i'm on part 3 and im already addicted and glued to the computer monitor this is damn good and im voting now!!!