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《Rose》The Musing of a Wandering Mind

Reviewer- therosepoetk
The Musing of a Wandering Mind by untouched_book

The title is really pretty, and I like how you chose to title it in a way that's dreamy and nice. It's relevant to your poems, even though they're not connected much. The cover is simple yet sweet, so I really like that. Perhaps you can move up your name a tad, just so readers can see that crediting. Your blurb is short, and it has this cute poem in it which I interpreted as a summary.

I think you should talk about what your collection is all about, and what themes and messages that your prose is aiming to send. I feel that in my opinion, poetry can be split up using the emotions and meanings that they are most true to, so I think that could really emphasize that. Check over your grammar and spelling, and it's great. You could add more aesthetics to make your poetry pop, just a suggestion.

I love the actual poetry though - just replace the vocabulary with more emotionally appealing words, and you're golden. But overall, I adored how the flow was so smooth, your emotions expressed were really raw and authentically exposed, and the imagery and details were stunning. Magnificent work, my fellow poetess!