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《Kailyn》"Reincarnation And Retributions"

"Reincarnation and Retributions" by BlazePR5

Reviewer: Kailucy

Cover 8/10

First glance, and I liked the subtitle. It drew me into the cover right away. Honestly, the cover could be better if the 'R' in 'Reincarnation' wasn't cropped where only half the letter was seen. But overall, I think it's an interesting cover.

Title 9/10

At first glance, I like the title. It's unique and interesting. As I read the story, it hasn't been made clear why it has this title. But given there are only five chapters currently, I'm sure it will be made clear as the story progresses.

Blurb 9/10

It's a little vague, but it says enough. It's captivating and well worded. With that said, it could be a bit better if it was a little longer. But I do like what you have since it does its job and drew me in to want to find out more.

Character development 7/10

In the few chapters, there are. I didn't notice much character development. But given as I said for the title since there are only a few chapters I don't want to give a low grade since I feel with the way you're going there will be some development.

Plot 16/20

It's kinda slow at the moment, but I understand that you're trying to introduce the main characters. Based on the last chapter. I feel the plot is going to start picking up at great speed.

Writing style 19/20

There's only one way to put it. I loved your writing style. It flowed nicely. And I loved the use of uncommon words but not so hard I needed a dictionary to understand what you were saying. Your descriptions were amazingly written. The dialogue seemed a bit forced at times but other than that. Your writing is superb.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary 8/10

It was mostly perfect. At least from what I was able to pick out. But there were two constant things I noticed: the use of two question marks when characters would ask questions. There only needs to have one. And the use of commas after quotations. But other than that. Very well done.

Enjoyment 9/10

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It was very well written and captivating. It's something I'd like to continue reading to find out what happens next.

Overall 85/100

Overall, I loved it. I think you did a wonderful job of writing this. Keep up the great work!