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《Via》A Love Too Far

A Love Too Far by blinky_army4ever

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

I’ll be honest I don’t usually read fanfiction  a lot as it is my least favourite genre but I gotta admit blinky_army4ever, your book was pretty good. Not bad! You’ve managed to make me like fanfictions a little bit more now, you should be proud of yourself!

Cover:
I really like how all of the pictures have the same kind of theme to each other and that they’re not clashing together, I will also say this, they all have great hair! This cover, honestly it gives me a movie poster feel, which I think works well with you story as it is kinda a action story as well, all in all I really like this cover, so well done!!

Description:
A problem I have with the description is with the line “is unwilling to love the main lead” the ‘is’ should be ‘are’ because it should be plural as you are talking about more than one person, but other than that this was a pretty well written description, so well done for that!

Storyline:
I really did feel like that I was in the book and that I myself had to find my way out, your story is very fast paced which I think is perfect because this book’s subgenre would be adventure so I think it works well. About the storyline I really like it, there is never a moment where it gets boring, there’s always drama happening which I am a huge fan of, so I think that this is a really good storyline and I can’t wait to see how you develop it even further, to be honest with you I actually really want to know how it ends, so please update it soon even though you just recently did.

Characters:
I really like it when writers put character pictures and give them their own bios in the story, so thank you for that. Something I really like about your story is that even though there are so many different characters, not one of them becomes forgotten about and then just doesn’t show up anymore, this is a very good feature. I noticed that there are more characters in the story for example Jisoo and so on, and I think it would be a good idea to create character profiles for them as well, it’s just a suggestion but I think it would be good for your story, seeing as in the book Jisoo is the second big female lead.

Grammar/Spelling:
Well I can happily say that I haven’t found any grammar/spelling errors at all, so well done for that! You must’ve proofread your book a lot, and even though you may use simpler words, you got your point across and said what you wanted to and you’ve still managed to tell a really good story!!

Engagement of the reader:
I will say this, for a fanfiction it was actually pretty good, and that’s a lot coming from me, it’s got a great storyline and great characters, for me I think those are the important things about a book. I hope that you never give up with book!