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Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

99 notes till I confess by girlwithnoinnocence

This is my fourth review for girlwithnoinnocence I enjoyed the past 3 books she asked me to review so I'm probably gonna enjoy this one.

Cover:
I really like the stars and the moon in the background because I am a really big fan of astrology, this is honestly such a amazing cover, I also love how clear the picture is, it's not fuzzy at all, not one bit, so well done!!

Description:
I love how even though the blurb is short, it still manages to reveal little gems of what the story is about without revealing all of it and then spoiling the plot, the line "Will he loves her just like she does?" I feel would be better as "Will her love her just like she loves him?" other than that it's still a good description.

Storyline:
The story shows the exchange of letters between a girl named "H" whose full name we don't know yet but will probably find out later on in the story and a guy named Jimin who she has a crush on, she's planning on writing 99 letters to him and then she'll confess to him, this is such a interesting idea, I like it. Something I find really funny is that in every single letter at the end of it, it would almost always have the line "Have a great day :)", I can't wait to read all 99 letters!

Characters:
"H" is a nice girl, she's also really encouraging as well which is shown when she motivates Jimin by telling him that his family are wrong about him being a bad dancer and that they would eventually realise his potential as a dancer. Jimin is also shown as being a nice guy as well, such as when he saves chocolate for "H" to not make her feel sad anymore, and it's sweet of him to also write back to her and not just ignore the letters she gives him.

Spelling/Grammar:
I couldn't find any mistakes at all, I'm actually a big fan on receiving letters so I was really interested in this story, you've done good in this area, well done on not having any mistakes at all, even though the letters are short, it doesn't make them any less cute and sweet.

Engagement of the reader:
All in all, I enjoyed reading this story and cannot with for you to update and to be able to read it all, so I'll be waiting for the next update, I really enjoyed reading the letters between the two and watch their relationship with each other progress, so you've got a good plot here!!

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