Trust a Vampire? You've gotta be kidding me. - Gabby

I killed the only man I knew and loved. Well shit. Will I let the pain consume me or will I find light in my darkened days. Or will I die from too much exposure of Jay's cocky, arrogant, ignorant, unhelpful, snobby voice. I don't know, but probably the last one. I do know that I'm hungry for redemption.

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I love that you keep repeating phrases its like shes realizing that the stuff has really happened and makes me feel sad for her.

wow, this is amazing! It just hooks your attention right from the beginning. Leaves a lot of question though, which I suppose is a good thing. Definitely makes me want to read more!

wow well done
                              it's really good
                              it catches my attention really well and i like it alot, and i dont like vamp stuff
                              watch your spelling
                              but, really really well written =D

omg i got my inspiration from dinner with a vampire and silent beauty love them

You're actually a good writer hun. You did a good job, but I dont do vampire stories. Now...dont get all down on yourself, I was entertained and I didnt come away from this think///man this chick sucks, you're good...REMEMBER THAT

I like this so far, very interesting and I think I may continue onto the next part XD