Naruto OC reviews

OC 110 (Uchiha Rinorah)

This OC is by Ceraza_Senpai I hope you like it.
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Genre: Fanfiction that was previously made by me but taken down from the lack of creativity. Note that this is the cliché "from another world" story, so my oc knows the fate of the world.

Ok, thanks for telling me

Name: Uchiha Rinorah

Nice name

Age: [Same as Team 7] 12 in part one and so on

Good

Gender: Female

Nice

Sexuality: Bisexual [Because why not]

Ok

Family: Unnamed Mother (Deceased) Unnamed Father (Deceased) Shisui [Older brother] (Deceased) [[[I'm not so sure who Shisui's parents are except he is the supposed descendent of another known Uchiha]]]

Thanks for the family relationship and life status. Do more research on Shisui than if you are gonna make him her brother.

Appearance: At 12 years old, she has the normal Uchiha features, including almost unnoticeable long dark blue hair, onyx (black) eyes, and ivory skin. She shares the same well-defined-eyelashes as her brother and looks strikingly similar to Nohara Rin, as Kakashi noted. During her days in Team 7, she wears an oversized version of a standard Shinobi shirt and pants. I sorta took this look from another Oc named Kiyo Nara (not mine for sure) who had the simplest clothing I've seen on a character. I liked it... I hope that's not bad. I still haven't finished writing the rest of the "series", so like... yah... spoilers?

It's not bad as long as you actually didn't take the style, now using it as inspiration is a better phrasing unless you actually took it than yeah that's bad. Even if spoilers, if you want a good review you should try to give me the most for the OC or else I won't be able to tell if the OC has problems until it's too late. Right now though it's looking good, just be careful about the "took" her style thing.

Personality: She's somewhat quiet. Rinorah is silent, quite shy when someone first meets her, but if they become friends, then that's a different story. She will unintentionally loosen up and you'll find out that she is compassionate, helpful, a bit of a jokester, and yet, if teased correctly, will become a blushing mess. Just like her brother, she seemed to understand the emotional nature of others, and thus was very worried about her fellow clansman, Sasuke after the Uchiha massacre. When she was still in the academy, she never liked voicing her own opinions and was not a leader, more of a follower. With Team 7, she is learning to fix those flaws. Part of the problem was her knowledge of the Shinobi world. She was afraid of the butterfly effects. Her presence could definitely change something. As for her intellect, she excels in Mathematics because she retained her previous knowledge from the other world. She struggles with Kanji, since her first language was English, but takes in information easier than others. Training is tough but she reads books for easier poses and such. She relies a bit on books for information and to familiarize herself with the language.

Ok this is good but since she already knows what happened to Sasuke why is she worried? I have seen OCs follow the same old routine of they know it will happen and they go to the event and than just watch it play but with her intellect maybe she can do something else. Maybe she can make Sasuke's life better. She knows the story and you could be the first OC to actually change it and be different than the cliche story. Plus it would help with adding creativity to the table instead of following the same recipe. It's just a suggestion.