Naruto OC reviews

OC from the story Akashi

Hey guys today I'm doing a OC by NWO_FullMetal who has the story named Akashi. I did Akashi from the request in the past and now I have one of his teammates. This is exciting and I hope you guys like this OC. Also if you like Akashi and this OC make sure to check out their story. Now on with the OC.
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Name: Kaito Roka

Meaning: From Japanese 海 (kai) meaning "sea, ocean" combined with 斗 (to), which refers to a Chinese constellation, or 翔 (to) meaning "soar, fly". Other kanji combinations are also possible. 

Roka: Japanese name meaning "White crest of the wave". 

Source: Behindthename.com

A very interesting name. Thanks for the meaning and combination.

Gender: Male

Great, and people say their aren't any male Naruto OCs. They need to look.

Birthdate: November 3rd

Thanks for the birthdate.

Family: Miyoko Roka (Mother) Alive), Yukio Roka (Father), Naname Roka (Sister)

Nice family. By the way is Naname a older or little sister? That's it. I believe they are all alive.

Personality: He's very troubled, pretends to not care, hides his emotions. He's very stubborn and doesn't feel comfortable asking for help. He's often shunned from conversations with his family since they think they know everything. 

He does seem very troubled. It's good to see he is in the same grouping of emotions. Instead of seeing shy, sweet, adventurous, mean, and all that crap.

He often finds himself questioning whether or not if his family loves him or not since most of the time he feels neglected and often feels as though his parents play favorites with his little sister, Naname. 

Ok so Naname is the little sister. Alright, this can be relatable to many people which would make people love him more. Many older siblings feel neglected by parents because of the younger sibling getting all the attention. This adds character and a hint of jealousy, nicely done.

As a result, he's often cold and refuses to acknowledge anyone other than himself. 

Like I said with the older sibling and the younger getting the credit. It is very relatable. Great job.

He often thinks of Akashi as a rival, yet at the same time secretly admires his determination to achieve his goals. He views Akashi sort of as an older brother figure since he never knew what it was like to have an older sibling.

A good way to put it. It also adds to the rivalry. Like how Naruto Is Sasuke's rival and thinks of him as a brother, Akashi and Kaito are the same. Plus siblings do love to out do each other which makes the rivalry and brotherly friendship more powerful.

Although, he would never admit any of this to Akshi willingly. 

Again, it adds to the rivalry. You wouldn't want them to know what you actually thought of them like that and this OC brings that into perspective. I can tell you really thought him out as you were making him.

Kaito often uses his crush on Hana as a goal to work toward. His feelings for Hana often cloud his judgment and the real him stands out when she's alone with him. He lacks courage but is determined to gain his courage and strength.