Naruto OC reviews

OC 83 (Uzumaki Kessho)

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So I tought I could share my own idea here too. In the story she got reincarnated as a gamer. [Basically it's just that her skills are listed and she's rewarded with some points if she trains, and some actions have required amount of point you need to make that, like saving lifes in a battle] Hope you'll like it!

You know this sounds very interesting and a game I hope i can play one day because it would be cool to have a game where you ate put in it, kinda like sword art online but with Naruto.

Genre: Fanfiction, this Oc is already in one, but I would like to hear your opinion on her

Thanks I'll review her to the best of my abilities

Name: Uzumaki Kesshō [she doesn't know about her Uzumaki heritage, until her mother tells her]

Oh so her mother is a Uzumaki but never told her? How does that work? That's like never knowing your last, like my last name is night so that's like never seeing the mail, or in naruto... mail from carrier birds and just looking at it, do people not go up to whoever is the Uzumaki in her family and ask about the massacre or treat them differently like how they treat Sasuke? There's just so many questions.

Age: 
Part 1: 12 
Part 2: 16 [I don't know yet if she'll survive the war]

Naruto age, great

Gender: female

Nice

Appearance:
Part 1: Light purple hair that reaches the middle of her back, but usually tied up in a high ponytail. She has slightly tanned skin, and hazel eyes, that she inherited from her father. She wears short-sleeved cream colored jumpsuit, under it a long sleeved navy shirt, and fishnet. She wears golden yellow trousers that reaches her knee, and the rest of her legs are bandaged. Her nija sandals are blue, just like the forehead protector she wears on her forehead. She also wears a crystal necklace, wich is important to her. She also wears her shuriken pouch on her right leg.

This is really good, her appearance is nice and I can imagine it greatly.

Part 2: Her hair darkened, so it's now indigo colored, it reached her hip, and she wears it in a loose pony tail or in a braid. Her jumsuit is now replaced with a black one [similar to Shippuuden Naruto], and it's sleeves are midnight blue, and it has the Uzumaki symbol on it's back. She wears white sleevless shirt under it, and she still wears fishnet. Her sandals reaches the middle of her shin, and now they are black. Her headband is now tied aroud her neck, and it's also black. She still has the necklace. Now her trousers slightly reaches her ninja sandals. Now she carries aroud a katana that her civilian friend made her.

So she has the same outfit as Naruto? You know she can look different right it's not required for the Uzumaki clan to wear the same jumpsuit. Naruto's jumpsuit is supposed to be a his thing, not saying she can't wear one but when it's similar enough to the main character it doesn't feel like her especially sense her first outfit wasn't similar to Naruto's. There are many different kinds out there so exploring them to fit her look more would be better.