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This OC is by InfinityBurger I hope you like it. _________________________________________
Name: Hitsoshi Uchiha
Nice name.
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Thanks for the picture. So this is how he looks part 1 and part 2 huh? Nice.
Chakra Nature: Fire and Lightning
Ok, nice and it's only two.
Jutsu: Fire
Ok
Release: Fire Ball Lightning
Sounds nice. It also goes straight to the point.
Style: Black panther
What? What do you mean style and do you meanblack panther as in Wakanda?
Cocky, attractive, easily annoyed
Ok, so that sums up his personality in three words.
Goal: To give the Uchiha name a good rep.
That's a pretty good goal sense he has to compete with Sasuke since he's out there making people fear him.
Family: Deceased and unknown.
So are they dead and he don't know where they are or does he not know who they are? If he don't know them how does he know If they are dead or not?
Origin: He found himself in the middle of his dead family. He was just 1. Barely knowing his parents. After he found he wasn't the only Uchiha he set out to kill a uchiha. The reason behind that was because he found out a Uchiha killed his parents. "Stand in my way and you'll just die like the rest.
Wait what? How is he 1 and he finds himself in the middle of his dead family? Also if he wants to give the Uchiha clan a good name why would he go and kill them? Also how come he didn't die? Maybe instead of him being 1 where he doesn't know much he's 6 or 5 so he at least know something. Other than that it's good. _________________________________________
Final Analysis- This OC doesn't have a lot of information but it is ok, I was able to work with what I had. Also I would suggest working on his origin. The questions I asked before should help you and if you have any questions or suggestions I am always open to hear and give you advice. Thank you for letting me review your OC it was a honor. . . . . . .
