Naruto OC reviews

OC 49 (Aijin Uchiha)

This OC is by _MissHatake_ I hope you like it.
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Genre | Fanfiction (Although still in my drafts, but I intend to publish it sometime in the future once I gain more courage.)

Sure, I'm happy to help you before you fanfiction comes out. I know it came out and I'm sorry it took this long but you can bet, after this I will be reading your story.

Name | Uchiha Aijin (Literally meaning 'Mistress' / 'Lover'.)

That's a beautiful name.

Age | Part I {12-13}, Part II {15-17}, The Last {19}, Boruto {32-N/A}.

Oh ok so she's Sasuke's age. I can't wait to see how she survived the uchiha massacre.

Gender | Female.

Cool

Family |

Father {Uchiha Fugaku, deceased.}

Mother {Uchiha Mikoto, deceased.}

Older Brother {Uchiha Itachi, deceased in Part II.}

Younger Twin Brother {Uchiha Sasuke, alive.}Appearance (Sorry if this will be long!) |

Oh so she's Sasuke twin sister. That's nice. Also it's no problem, you don't have to worry about it being long or short. Thanks for the life status and the roles of everyone in the family.

Part I Aijin is the same height as Sasuke, which makes her stand out amongst her female peers. Her raven hair is kept up in a high ponytail and brushes just past her hips. She realizes the burden of having long hair, hence the length changes in Part II. Front bangs frame her face and are also pushed back by her hitai-ate she wears around her forehead. Her skin is pale, but not in an unhealthy way, and eyes are a beady onyx. Respectively, her and Sasuke are alike in terms of looks, but she also resembles her mother a lot.

Cool, this is a very nice description, I could see her as I was reading this. I also like how you give her a physical flaw by having her as tall as Sasuke making other girls look at her weird. Nice.

As a genin Aijin wears a short dark blue turtle neck tank top that ends just below her chest with the Uchiha clan crest on the back. She has fishnet gloves that end at her mid-arm, also covered by grayish/pale blue armwarmers that cover her forearms, accompanied by dark green gloves. Bandages cover her legs and just barely reach her torso, though only the latter is visible considering she also wears dark green shinobi pants that hang on her hips loosely. Aijin's weapon pouch is strapped around her right thigh, she also has multiple thin pouches stuffed with senbon coated in poison strapped around her legs, reaching from her mid-calf to the ankles, leaving her dark blue mid-calf shinobi boots sticking out. 

This is nice and I can imagine it but I would recommend having something under her shirt so her stomach isn't showing, she would be fine in Shippudden because she's older but not in the regular Naruto series. Maybe she could wear fishnets under it or bandages, if not than maybe another shirt underneath.

Part II Aijin's hair is let down but barely brush past her mid-arm, and her front bangs are pushed up and pulled back to connect at the middle back of her head with a simple hair-tie. She can't seem to tan, and still is a tall female that's only a little shorter than Sasuke.