Naruto OC reviews

OC 6 (Lilith Kānēshon)

This is by MisakeUchiha13
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Name: Lilith Kānēshon (Of the night, Carnation)

Cute name

Age: 14

Nice

Gender: Female

Cool

Family: Ikimono Kānēshon (sister that was adopted, 12), Ri Kānēshon (Mother, 38)

Cool

Appearance: Hair color- Long dark blue hair

Nice

Eye color- light blue

Cool

Skin tone- pale

Ok

Height- 5'3 Weight- 110 pounds

Nice height to weight ratio.

Clothing- White hoodie with no sleeves, black leggings, forehead protector on her forehead, black ninja sandals, and weapons pouch on left leg.

I have already talked about the leggings with your other OC so I won't repeat it again. Everything else is good though.

Personality- nice, sweet, polite, and she has a weakness of usually being carefree

Being carefree isn't exactly a weakness but it can be defined as a flaw.

Battle: Lilith stays out of the main battle usually and will cast genjutsu since she's good at it, since she lacks in taijutsu some and doesn't really like to be in the main fight unless necessary

Ok, nice.

Weapons: Kunai, smoke bombs, paper bombs, shuriken

These are good common ninja weapons.

Past: Lilith was born in the Leaf Village hospital, with her father unknown and her mother being Ri Kānēshon. Six years after Lilith was born, Ri Kānēshon met Ikimono and decided to adopt her. Lilith was excited since she'd have someone to play with and she'd be a big sister! As Lilith and Ikimono grew together they made a great bond with each other, they also went to the same class in the academy since Lilith couldn't decide if she wanted to go to the academy for two years.

Oh ok, that's a nice past and it isn't tragic. Good job.

Though, Lilith was always jealous of Ikimono because she was pretty good with tiejutsu, genjutsu, and ninjutsu so she would always try to push herself harder. That's all to Lilith's past, really. She had a pretty normal childhood.

It's good and different that she had a normal childhood. Good job.

Other: Lilith will usually be found alongside Ikimono in the trees since Lilith doesn't have too many friends and is quite attached to Ikimono.

Ok, cool.
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Final Analysis- I have really nothing to say about this OC. She is normal and has really nothing wrong with her. The only thing about her is the leggings. I would recommend the ninja tights or just regular pants for a ninja. It was a honor reviewing her and her sister. Thanks for choosing me to do it.