OC belongs to @23belln
Name: Storm
A bit unoriginal, but it works.
Age: Probably about 6 or 7.
Alright
Gender: Male
Nice
Sexuality: Currently straight
Cool
Tribe: Sky
Flame bois
Looks: A brightish red with pale yellow/orange scales. His horns look more brownish-black than charcoal black. He doesn't usually wear any accessories, though he occasionally caries a deer skin pouch to hold his scroll.
Try adding small details like eye colour, built, height, etc
Personality: he can be a bit thorny at times but he doesn't see himself that way. He thinks the other dragonets are his friends, although Catfish(a seaWing) is the only one who thinks of him as a friend. He tends to like to be alone, but he doesn't mind spending time with someone else. He also REALLY hates SandWings.
A bit bland, but works. Try adding more positive and negative traits.
Backstory: He hatched on the brightest night alongside six other dragonets, one of each species. He grew up with them, but he never really became friends with any of them. He found a secret cavern in the cave system where he was raised. In the cavern there were tunnels that led all around the mountain that he lived under. He found a scroll in that cavern, a scroll that could tell where an animus enchanted object was. In fact, it was an animus object itself. Then he finally became close friends with CatFish, the seawing DoD. They overheard a conversation between Blister and MorrowSeer. (And there isn't any more yet. Don't forget that this character is from an ongoing RP)
Alright, I'm not gonna comment on this then.
Occupation: he's too busy stopping the War of the SandWing succession to get a job.
Mood.
Residence: Under a mountain
Cool
Relatives: his egg was stolen so he doesn't know who he is related too, though he has a slight crush on CatFish.
Okay
Friends: CatFish
Alright
Crush: CatFish
Nice
Abilities: Oof NONE.
F.
Hobbies: Reading, Exploring the hidden cavern/tunnels, Reading, Talking to CatFish, Reading, listening to stories from Webs, did I mention Reading?
Cool.
Other: he found an animus enchanted scroll that lets him see when a new animus object is created and where animus objects are.
Alright
Overall I give Storm a 6.5/10. Work on his appearance and personality, and backstory.
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