( FINISHED ) Wings of Fire OC Rating

Northstar

OC belongs to @Eclispefansty101

Name: Northstar (North-Icewing and Star-nightwing)

Very obvious, but pretty.

Gender:Female

Okay

Age:5 (which I'm guessing is like I teen in dragon years)

Ya I think it is

Tribe: Icewing/Nightwing hybrid

Hmmmmm...okay

Appearance: she has a pale blue underbelly and arctic blue scales, she has a elegant head and body shape like a Icewing, spikes are coming out of her head and down her back to her tail the spikes are black, curved black claws, black tongue, deep blue eyes, the rim of her wings are dark blue and her actual wings are black with white specks/dots that look like snow falling on a night sky, and last she wears a bracelet that has ice cubes that are in the shape of raindrops she got the bracelet from her parents on her first birthday

Okay, I REALLY like this appearance. And you actually included body shape!

Personality:Kind but not to kind where she's a doormat, she tries to act braves and confident but is really actually shy and scared quite a bit, she gets super mad when she gets picked on, she has a problem of holding her feelings in, but thankfully she is usually happy, and she likes to keep to herself unless she really knows someone, and she is always trustful(like where people can trust her)

Okay, maybe a few more flaws but that might be stretching it.

Backstory: Northstar is always trying to impress her older siblings and parents but her oldest sister is always picking on her instead, her twin is always looking out for her and so is her best friend, she is always wanting to be thought highly of, she is usually clumsy and always tripping over her talons, she loves going on adventures with her friends, she at one point goes to JMD for a couple of years but then she leaves at the age of 8 an becomes the head guard of the Queen but also still does ice sculpting

Wait..you said she was five but left JMA at 8? Also, kinda bland. Maybe add a few more details if she's a main character/persona.

Occupation:doesn't really have one but is training to be a guard for the Queen, she also creates beautiful ice sculptures for the Queens palace and court yard

Nice.

Residents: Icewing Kingdom

Cool, but does Queen Glacier accept hybrids now? Also does the Great Wall let her in since she's part Icewing?

Relatives:
Father-Winter
Mother-Moonwatcher (my friend thought that I would be the children of this ship but I'm not sure why)
Siblings-Spirit oldest (sister and oldest of her siblings) Snowseer (brother) and Southstar (twin brother 5min older)

I like the siblings names. However, I don't know if it's possible to be five minutes older then your twin in WoF because twins are hatched in the same egg.
Also I know this was posted before Darkness of Dragons was out but Moon X Qibli happened.

Friends: Sandstar a Icewing/Sandwing hybrid (this character is suppose to represent my friend) and Icespike

Okay.

Crush: Icespike (later on her mate)

Okay.

Abilities:Frost breath, fire breath and mind reading/prophecy( but she gave her family and friends sky fire)

Nice, however I think a lot of the Skyfire would be gone by now lol.

Hobbies: scroll writing, drawing, singing, ice sculpting

I like the ice sculpting.

Other: She used to have a pet scavenger named Thief but later let her go and then got a pet arctic wolf she named Snowfur

Thief...nice name.

Overall, I give Northstar a 8/10. Add onto her backstory some more, and if wanted change her parents since Moon X Qibli is now canon, but other then that good!