OC belongs to @LiterallyWoFTrash
Name: Sahara
I like the name, but doesn't make that much sense since Sahara is a human...sorry AHEM *cough cough* Scavenger thing.
Age: 4
Nice
Gender: Female
Okay
Tribe: Just a normal SandWing
Coolio
Appearance: Dusty white like a normal SandWing with a bit of golden scales on her underbelly, black scales by her eyes.
Add body shape, eye colour, height, etc etc
Sexuality: panromantic asexual
Okay cool. Don't see many of those.
Personality: EXTREMELY unsocial as she was not raised around other dragons, very bookish, worrisome and cautious, artistic, but also kind of sarcastic as she doesnt know how to interact with other dragons her age.
Actually pretty good, but add some more good traits to balance things out.
Attires: golden locket that she enchanted.
Okay
Powers:Animus, but never uses it because she is too worried.
Hmm...is she a descendant of Jerboa? And also, you said she enchanted her locket..so?
Abilities: Normal SandWing fire and tail
Okay
Queen supporting: Queen Palm and Queen Kite (she lives on SkyWing territory.)
Like the names.
Backstory: She was raised on a patch of SkyWing territory on the other side of the mountain range. Her parents were merchants.
Good for a minor character, but if persona/main character add much, much more detail.
Relatives: Mother: Owl
Father: Cobra
Baby brother: Eucalyptus
Cool names. I like Owl.
Crush: Raptor of the SkyWings
I like that name too.
Mates: um no
Ya duh
Dragonets: wth she's four
Ikr
Other: Gold winglet of Jade Academy
Cool..?
Overall, I give Sahara a 6/10. Work on personaltiy, looks and backstory by adding more details.
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