Retired Poems(ages 13-16ish)

Retired Poems(ages 13-16ish)

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Pepper Boy. By Courchesne Updated Dec 14, 2010

Bad, embarrassing poetry from a few years back. I liked reading them over, to see the improvement & things I've gotten through. I'm going to explain what they're about and stuff. When I'm dissatisfied with my more recent poetry, they will go here and be explained and stuff too. Some of them I'm sure I'll be labeling "Don't comment" Please listen if you see that.

- - May 27, 2014
Love the style ye av created it at, really liked it, wona vote :)
Jirehis Jirehis Mar 29, 2011
Ah, you touched me..... Such powerful words and insight.... 
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Dec 08, 2010
I absolutely love this! The fourth line, sixth line and last paragraph especially are amazing! I just wish such a great poem wasn't caused by something so horrible :/
ElizabethCole89 ElizabethCole89 Dec 06, 2010
Very powerful, and relatable. Two thumbs up! And I'm sorry you went through something like that.
TheWoefulOne TheWoefulOne Dec 03, 2010
@Courchesne Oh. lol. Sorry. haha. Anyway, still.... I think that you're writing is amazin'. xD
Whiskeynscotch Whiskeynscotch Dec 03, 2010
@SRMask  def agree a freakin genius, but honestly your work speaks with language that is true and sometimes painful to realize but also put in a way 
                              that keeps you eager for more...  
                              this one i love <3