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Review by Cherylene: Crown of Roses

Title: Crown of Roses

Author: LennoxFields

Reviewer: QuinerSacyLove

Cover: 5/5

I honestly love the connection between the title, cover and plot.

Summary: 5/5

No words, except I wish I could give more marks.

Spelling: 5/5

The spelling is wonderful, and accurately accurate.

Vocabulary: 5/5

According to the time period and the setting of the plot, the vocabulary is perfect. Vocabulary is nothing less than deemed fit for this book.

Grammar + Punctuation: 10/10

The story is perfectly edited, no punctuation marks amiss, no words here or there. Everything looks like it was meant for this book.

Sentence Structure + Paragraphing: 10/10

Honestly, the structures are perfect. Paragraphs are right where they should begin.

Plot Development: 10/10

I have not read the whole book yet, but the story still flows seamlessly from one chapter to another. It is like the chapter never ended.

Characterisation: 10/10

I like the way how you never told us that she is unique, that she is special, and you left that to us to decide. The characters are perfectly formed, with ups and downs.

Character Interactions + Relationships: 9.9/10

Okay, I know I just probably spoiled your full score, but then I think this needs to be covered. The dialogues are good, but then I feel that you should provide translation, to save readers the hassle of translating the text.

Creativity + Originality: 10/10

Cliché? This story? I could never even have dreamt of this plot, making the Beast a king, and Beauty something the MC desires, not has. This sounds more like a story, than a retelling.

Writing Quality: 10/10

The writing evokes feelings. It is perfect. I especially liked how you used metaphors related or involving seas. The writing flows like a sea, the devices used are good.

Enjoyment: 11/10

No words. 

OVERALL SCORE: 100.9/100

One sentence. This book needs to be published. Right now.