HOW TO: Injury

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Some things characters may do when they're injured:

1 -  heavy/harsh/ragged breathing

2 -  panting

3 -  making noises of pain: 

-gasping

- grunting

-hissing

- groaning

- whimpering

- yelping (when the injury is inflicted)

- screaming

- shrieking

- wailing

4 - crying/weeping/sobbing etc.

5 - clenching their teeth

6 - unable to speak

7 - pressing their hands against the stab wound/cut  to try and stem the bleeding

8 - eyesight going out of whack (vision blurring and tilting, the room spinning, black spots consuming sight)

9 - eyes rolling into their head





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