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C H A P T E R 26

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Please its a request .

Silent readers who ever are reading the story but not liking it can u say me what is the problem in the story so that I can improve myself to write better .

It is taking two days for me to write one chappy and when I am using my all time in writing chappy , it is my responsibility to know atleast where I am doing wrong , frnds say me wht u r not liking in the story .

Liking takes less then One sec but i am not asking u ppl u like my story without really enjoying while reading . But say me wht is the problem in story .

At start in prolouge only I stated clearly that this is a Traingle love story .
So while the story takes place , when chappy unfolds you will get to see everything you want .

Some are saying I am giving more importance to Parth and showing him in a more good way then Neil .

There should be a different in roles we write and in most of the stories Neil is very good as he is a hero so I changed his role a bit in my story , I want to show him a sligh different arrogant way .

How his love (Avni ) had changed him from Arrogant , obsessed Lover to Sweetheart Neil . So for that someone had to be opposite of him so I have choosed Parth .

Guys please if you don't like the story say it in comments atleast I will try to change my writing skills , when you ppl say me how the story is going on then only I will able to write good chappies .

I really don't want likes but Comments are necessary .

110 views and 27 likes ,
I am not understanding where I am doing wrong .

Or is this the matter you ppl r just opening the story and without even reading it closing as my story is boring u guys ! Is that soo ??

When i will get appreciation only i can write better , I am not even asking for appreciate my story without really liking it , just say me where I am doing wrong so that I can correct myself .

Sorry friends if u feel offended by my words , I just want to share my feelings .

Sorry guys if u feel my words are harsh .

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Story continues :-

Avni :- Tillu till when are you going to stay in India ?

Neil :- I am having concert here in few days Avii , so I am going to stay here for a while . And there is a good news for you .

Avni :- For me ! What is that Neiluuu .

Neil :- Ha for you only cutie but I am not going to reveal it now .

Avni :- Bolo Na .

Neil :- I will but not now , you will find it yourself in few hours till then come we will go for shopping .

Avni :- Shopping is so boring Neiluu .

Neil :- You are the only girl who I know is not excited for shopping .

Avni :- Because I don't love it .

Neil :- Achaa but we are not going for any dress shopping kiddo . I need to purchase some home related stuff soo... can we go now !!

Avni :- Ha I love home shopping but not dress and accesories those are so boring and time consuming .

Neil :- Then how you do your shopping ?