Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #198: Fix You(Niall Horan)

author: Gaboinks

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want something easy to read

plot:

Izhy Hastings is the definition of a broken, sad girl who looks at the world in a pessimistic way. She doesn't suffer depression, nor she isn't suicidal. In fact, she can be happy. But it's just not enough. Now, when she stumbles upon a gang of kidnappers, she thinks she's dead meat. But what happened when a celebrity saved her? More importantly, what is her answer when he asks her to be his friend?

review:

Story: This story wasn’t outstanding, but it wasn’t horrible to read. I really admire the friendship shown in this story, since it has survived through many years and judging by what we see it gets stronger every day. And also the couple looks kind of awkward but it’s still cute

Grammar: it’s alright

Characters: Like I said my favorite thing was the friendship between the two girls since it’s a tight bond. And also really liked that though the girl is very insecure and feels like she has no purpose in life she stills smiles and tries to have a good time

note to author:

if you’re reading this, thanks for making this. I want to apologize deeply, because I totally forgot the whole storyline to make this review; I had to reread some chapters so I wouldn’t write something that didn’t happen :\. I hope you update soon to see if I grow a love to it. Keep writing and take care ;)

*wipes sweat out of forehead* hope you enjoyed this. Comment, share, vote, follow, read my fanfic reviews book vol.1, if you read teen fiction read my teen fiction reviews book, and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)