Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #124: Irresistible(Niall Horan\Harry Styles)

 author: NiallsCuppyCake

rating: N\R

read it if: you just want to read something

plot: not available

review:

This story can be described with just one word: cliche. Let's see why:

-The characters met backstage and it was love at first sight

- They didn't met even for a month and there was "I love you" confessions and marriage proposals

-The parents were kind of easy to convince to let their daughters live with popstars

-Another celebrity(not gonna spoil) falls in love with the girl but then the girl plays matchmaker and finds a rebound and he moves on quickly

-The conversations are text style,with emoticons included

With no plot, grammar that needs to be fixed,flash development... read it if you want a example of pure fantasy(but if you get frustrated and\or get headaches don't blame me)

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. I didn't really enjoyed this; it was too rushed,surreal,and I'm a grammar nazi so imagine my whining. Maybe the only thing I liked was the appearance of JB but just because not everybody does that,not because I'm a fan. hope this didn't hurt you.Keep writing and take care ;)

I'll just go and read or record now,hope you enjoyed this.Comment,share,vote,follow,read my fanfic reviews book vol.1,if you read teen fiction read my teen fiction reviews book,and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)