review #129: Screw Up(Harry Styles\Niall Horan)

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by laly13

Dedicated to welcalum

by laly13

author: welcalum

rating: PG

read it if: you like plot twists

plot:

Harry Styles. Perfect. Womanizer. The totally cheeky lady's man, right? wrong. Harry Styles has been in love with his best friend, Charlotte, since he could remember, but one night, two years ago, he hurt her and she left. Once she comes back into his life he thinks he has a second chance, but what happens when horrible events start to happen to Charlotte? What happens when the unthinkable happens to her? Can he win her back? Most importantly can he save not only her, but himself from his massive screw up?

review:

Pros and cons for my favorite people

-First pro is the climax of the story. Not gonna spoil much,but there's massive plot twists

-And second pro is the cover of the story. The pic of the cover is one of my favorite pictures of Harry, so the author won a little of my love towards the story

-First con is that the plot twists are very confusing. I had to read twice and even stop reading for a moment to make a mental puzzle to understand the events

- I like love triangles, and Harry and Niall are my top 2 guys of the band, but it's getting old the love triangles with these two. There are other 3 guys to pick people!

- And this is kind of cliche since in stories when the friends doesn't see each other in years they always find each other somewhere and try to make up for loss time

With a kind of cliche and full of questions plot,nice grammar, tricky development...read it if you're in for surprises

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. At first the story was kind of boring,but then it got interesting that I wanted-and I still do- to see more. I don't know what else to add,so just keep writing and take care ;)

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