Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #169: P.S, I Love You(Liam Payne)

author: MyHeartsMistake

rating: N\R

read it if: you like short stories or stories narrated in 2nd POV

plot:

From eight year olds to eighty-eight year olds. Letters from Liam.

review:

Time for some pros and cons!

-I think this was a excellent way to write a story because:

+It isn't the same old movie or TV show style we always read; instead is in letter style that, though is shorter, is kind of more insteresting

+There was a great detail balance. There wasn't excess of details that the only thing it does is bore the reader, but it doesn't lack details so the reader doesn't stay confused and asking a million questions of what she\he's reading

+The 2nd POV is, in my opinion, the hardest way to write; but thank God the author knew how to use it so we can really see and enjoy how both characters communicate with each other and how they feel without any confusions

-The only con is that because this is a story about the whole life of two people, it turns predictable eventually

With a short and lacking plot(it doesn't really explain a lot of the story), good grammar, great development... read it if you want to read something adorable but different

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. From all your works I've read this is my favorite; it was so good I finished it in a hour or less(I don't remember the time hehe). About the con there really isn't anything that can change that, so I won't give any recommendations for this time. Keep writing and take care ;)

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