Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #166: Take Me As I Am(One Direction)

author: MyHeartsMistake

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want a crazy fanfic

plot:

I don't like One Direction.

So can someone please tell me why I'm stuck on a game show with the five boys who have stolen millions of girls' hearts?

review:

Pros and cons time!!

-I consider this book as a really funny one cause the theme is a reality show, reality shows are all about stupid random situations, and this filled the expectations

-I also really liked that the author made a excellent balance between writing what she really wanted and making little scenes so everybody could be pleased with their shippings. Take notes love shapes' authors out there

-Con is that the plot isn't the type it needs a billion chapters to be developed, and sadly the author made a lot of chapters or this story that it turned boring and I think I made a party when I finally finished(not exaggerating)

With a straight to the point plot, good grammar, kind of dragging development...read if you like love shapes and\or reality shows

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. I give 3 stars: it had a interesting concept and the way you made endings was amazing, but it was too long and dragging to me. Recommendation is to try and take a shot at short stories, cause I read "P.S I love you" (reviewing soon), it's my fave work of yours, and it's short. Keep writing and take care ;)

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