review #146: My Best Friend Went To England And All She Got Was...Harry Styles?

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author: LouisYou Hottie

rating: G

read it if: you want a crazy story

plot:

Meet Violet, she's not a huge fan of One Direction, but she likes their music and she thinks they seem like great guys. So what happens when her best friend, Amber, returns from her trip to England with an unconscious Harry Styles?

review:

A fresh edition of "why you SHOULD read this" coming up!

-This story is about Harry having amnesia after being hit by his kidnappers. Where do you see a plot like this one? 1 or 2 times in your lifetime if it doesn't become famous overnight

-This will always have you hooked since the same question lingers throughout the story: what will happen when he gains his memory?

- The girls are very crazy,so some funny situations are waiting for you

The only issue is that this doesn't have very frequent updates,but it has gotten better so your patience won't be running low

With a well made plot, good grammar, a little slow development, cunny(mix of cute and funny)... read it if you want something original and laughable

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. It doesn't beat "The Accidental Skype Call" but "Varry" is so cute this is a great second best. I don't have much to say now,so keep writing and take care ;)

Gone to keep working,hope you enjoyed this. Comment,share,vote,follow,read my fanfic reviews vol.1,if you read teen fictions read my teen fiction reviews book,and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)

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