Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #191: Dearest Juliet(Harry Styles)

author: Maddiefaith

rating: PG

read it if: you like stories about moving on

plot:

Dearest Juliet,

 You said that I have to get over you. Seriously, Juliet? You think that right after this has happened that I can just move on? You think that I can go out and live my life as if nothing happened? Well, I have news for you, I'm not moving on, Jules. I can't. Don't you see? You left too quickly for my heart to be ready for something like leaving you behind. I am so sorry, my love, but I just love you too much to keep the promise I made you.

I love you, Juliet, always and forever.

Love,

Curls

review:

Brace yourselves for another review!

Story- though the development is kind of slow, I enjoyed this story a lot. This story is about moving on from a deceased love. We all know any kind of loss is hard to cope, and this story played with it perfectly. With fun scenes, serious scenes, and a diary type segment that shows the realistic slow pace someone moves on from a death makes this story a two thumbs up one

Grammar- another thumbs up in my world

Characters- I must say my favorite character is the girl. She has a hard background and even has a tricky side, but I love how can she still live life to the fullest and spread it to others(in this case Harry). Talking about the couple for me it took a little time to ship them since the chemistry goes along with the story: started as a hesitant and cold relationship, but little by little it warmed for them and the reader

 note to author:

if you’re reading this, thanks for making this. If anyone I know personally asks me for a recommendation I would recommend this with pride. It did held fanfic points(he’s famous) but also realistic human situations with realistic paces that made my hand and my forehead get a break on their slapping relationship hehe. Keep writing and take care ;)

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