Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #156: Nothing More, Nothing Less(Harry Styles)

author: CharlotteLuvs1D

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want something mushy

plot:

Maya Hartman was never into One Direction. The twenty-six year old girl, living alone in an apartment in New York City and working at a girls' clothing store, was just never a big fan. That is, until Harry Styles moved into the apartment next to hers. After spending one day with him, she realizes how amazing and utterly captivating he is. Why would such a huge superstar like Harry Styles fall in love with a normal girl from New Jersey? How was that meant to be? Shouldn't he be falling for someone who was a little more exciting than just plain old Maya Hartman? Well that's what she thought... How easily will it take for Harry to make Maya fall for him? Will the new neighbors become more than 'just friends'? What will their careful relationship end up being like? Promising yourself that you won't fall for the British superstar living next door to you hasn't always been the easiest thing to do for the young and innocent girl who never expected to fall in love in the first place.

review:

Another pros and cons for my favorite people!

- The pro of this is that even though this screams MUSHY, the couple is so irresistible you simply don't care how cute,carroty, and long this looks like, you want more!

-The con is how irrealistical this story can turn sometimes. I know fanfics are pure fantasy, but too much happy stuff and just a little bit of drama is something too strange for this world, and can make any drama lover run away from this book and never look back

With a long but good plot, nice grammar, great development, 100% irresistible...read it if you're a broken reader who needs a break from getting frustrated because of bad situations on books

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. This story was completely awesome, and though yes I did have my drama cravings for this book, I'm definitely reading more of your works. I don't have much to say,just keep the good job. Keep writing and take care ;)

I must say bye bye now,hope you enjoyed this.Comment,share,vote,follow,read my fanfic reviews book vol.1,if you read teen fiction read my teen fiction reviews book,and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)