Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #153: Far(Harry Styles)

author: Fanstagramx

rating: PG-13

read it if: you like boarding school stories

plot:

We always want what we can't have. Better yet, what we don't want, we get.

Aria's emerging from a tough situation, and finds refugee in a crowded boarding school.

Harry is that misunderstood youth, moving from England was a hard transition.

The two both have their own secrets and stories, but combined together; does it equal out? . . .

After all, you only know how much you love something when it's FAR away from you.

review:

Time to do some pros and cons for my children

　

-If you're a future "After" reader, this can help prepare you for it; this is like the lighter version of it, so with this you can have a idea of what's to come and how to handle the drama

-As you all know, I have a pure love for boarding schools cause you can create a lot with that setting, so if you like creative drama, check this

　

-The con of this is the overused material,such as: love triangles,dark pasts,slutty enemies,etc

　

With a cliche but good plot, good grammar,great development...read it if you want something easy to read, but still awesome

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. I seriously thought this was going to be crap(since the cover isn't the best thing I've seen) but ever since I laid eyes on it I couldn't stop reading; I read it in just a hour and was craving for more hehe. The only thing I recommend is to make the "Harria" relationship clear,even for just 3 chapters,before you make more drama, and to update more often. Keep writing and take care

　

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