Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #161: How I Met Louis Tomlinson(Louis Tomlinson)

author: chloeerebecca13

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want something simple yet cool to read

plot:

One thing you should know about Cassie Nectar, is that she has a physco boyfriend. He's possessive, and treats her like a slave more than a girlfriend. So when she takes up the courage to put an end to their relationship - he's not happy. So much so, he tries to hurt her, but she's saved. By the dark haired and blue eyed boy that happens to be Louis Tomlinson. But is she safe?

review:

Time for a rare "why you SHOULD read this"

-First off the girl of this story had a abusive boyfriend, and of course that can leave anyone scarred for life. But instead of making a girl who only self pities herself and acts more freaked out than a person with pantophobia, the story made a strong girl that has the physical and emotional scars of a abusive relationship but moves on and takes legal action like a pro

-The couple of the story (Louis and the girl btw) is pretty easy to ship

-This is a story for you, people with massive imagination! This story ends in a proposal, so you're all free to imagine 20 weddings and futures hehe

With a so so plot, good grammar, good development... read it if you're a beginner in stories with serious cases of abuse or if you're in no mood for self-pitying girls

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. I was hooked with this story the first time I saw it(I hope it says much that I finished the chapters available at the time in one night). I wrote good stuff about this, but I'll also say this isn't my fave Louis fanfic (I feel something's missing so I can marry it but I don't know what is it hehe), but I'll still recommend it around. Keep writing and take care ;)

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