review #119: One Direction Fan Fiction(One Direction)

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by laly13

Dedicated to MrsHariboStyles

by laly13

author: MrsHariboStyles

rating: R

read it if: you want a overly cliché story

plot:

Ashley, Clara and Molly have been fans of one direction since they where 14 years old, but what happens when they end up meeting them in a unexpected event 5 years later? Do they hook up with their child hood sweethearts or will they end up broken hearted???

review:

The pros and cons are back!

-First pro is that this is a carrot story, so there you have another choice you group of nostalgic freaks(no offense intended)

-This story was set 5 years after the X factor tour,so that would be 2015-2016 if I'm not wrong. Now that it's 2013 is more easier to have a mental picture how they're gonna look like in that year,but it's still fun to guess that stuff; Just like me and maybe many people did in 2011-2012

-This story is set on North Ireland; and no,it isn't on the Ireland Niall is from. So if you want variation of places,here you have a option

- And last pro,does anyone remember Hannah? the girlfriend Louis had before Eleanor? well people, she is featured in this story!

-First con is that this story hasn't been updated in 2 freakin years. If you're gonna read this better have a lot of open ending ideas

-And last con is that this is more cliche than the own word

With a short but straight to the point plot,good grammar,mega slow development, very cute...read it if you want a oldie and\or you're very imaginative

This is a godchild of mine. Treat it like a baby

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. This is the first story I declared my favorite back in 2012 when I read stuff on my Wii,so congrats!! PLEASE COME BACK! I hate being left hangin' on,and worse if it's for 2 years.Keep writing,take care,and happy holidays ;)

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