Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #144: A Little Bit Of Love\Hate(Harry Styles)

author: ThoseRaeChicks

rating: PG-13

read it if: you're very patient with updates

plot:

Meet Sam Collins. She's the tiny, blue eyed girl that captured Harry Styles' heart when they were only fifteen. Of course, it wasn't easy. The two had everything completely wrong. They would fight, flirt, and then fight again, but that didn't stop them. Just before Sam and Harry are about to part ways they finally admit their feelings for each other. When Harry and Sam are both back in Holmes Chapel with old and new friends will they be able to continue their short romance, or will someone get in the way? Follow Sam and Harry as they go through the ups and downs of a love/hate relationship to see what becomes of their unlikely romance.

review:

Time for some pros and cons

-This story is from 2012, so you know what it means: good ol' times fanfic!!

-(spoiler alert) Harry here tends to say wrong the girl's name, and I find that rarely used in stories and kind of funny

　

-The only con is that this story isn't fully developed yet and it hasn't been updated in almost 2 years

　

With a good plot,good grammar,very slow development...read it if you're very interested in this

note to author:

If you're reading this, thanks for making this. Right now this story will look very cliche(since times change and people create new ideas) but I'm still reading this. PLEASE come back, 2 years on hold is A LOT of time. Keep writing and take care ;)

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