Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #188: The Bakery Girl(Niall Horan)

author: enchantedsmiles

rating: G

read it if: you like romance\suspense stories

plot:

Bel; a 19 year old brunette who dosen't like to uncovers her deepest secrets. Yet, that absolutely changes when... Niall; a 20 year old blonde who is shy and kind. Yet, that totally changes when... Bel started to own her parents bakery due to their death, she's broken and silent. Niall comes into the picture and started working at the bakery. He discovers how Bel is different than what some people say about her, bubbly and smiley. But he never saw her smile. What will happen when Niall burts into Bel's secret life with confidence and hope that he'll re-paint that smile on her face?

review:

Time for a short "why you SHOULD read this"

-First thing I like the balance between romance and drama this book has, because there isn't a lot of mushy stuff that can make me puke more than the "snogging club" at my school (don't ask), but there isn't either excess of drama that can make you die of a heart attack

-You want to stay interested in this book? The massive plot twists of this book will make sure of it

-And lastly the couple is one to admire, because even though the world is fighting like a giant warrior to tear them apart , they still stick together and even change each other for the better through the storm

With a good plot, good grammar, great development... read it if you want a "two thumbs up" book for your next reading session

note to author:

If you're reading this, I finally made your review! Time to party! I don't need to tell you how many stars this gets cause the whole review states the obvious. Don't know what else to add right now, so keep writing and take care ;)

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