Fanfiction Reviews By Laly13 Vol. 2(Requests Closed)

review #150: Take Me Home(Liam Payne)

author: KRandom

rating: PG-13

read it if: you want a easy to read story

plot:

What's wrong with me? I've been doing bad things after I had figured out that my boyfriend of two years has cheated on me with some school slut and even got her pregnant! He won't give up on me, but I'm moving. I'm moving with my mom and new soon-to-be step dad. I don't like this idea...

review:

I reached my 150th review!! let's celebrate with a edition of pros and cons

-The pro of this story is that we can learn from this that not every story couple is meant to be perfect

-The con of this story is that if you're looking for a kick-ass and hardcore story,this won't fill that request because,though it isn't mushy and full of rainbows,the drama is still too light

With a cool plot,good grammar, good development, easy to understand...read it if you're a light-story lover or you like any type of development style but want to take a break from hardcore

note to author:

If you're reading this,thanks for making this. This obviously doesn't beat "Stole my heart" and "The drummer"(my top 2 of your stories),but that doesn't mean this is crap,always remember that. I remember you talking about making a sequel; I don't recommend you to do one, it would just be a massive and innecesary filler. And lastly, you are on fire!! you were my review #50 in my first book,and now you're my #150, congrats!! Keep writing and take care ;)

Wow,review #150,thank you so much!! hope you enjoyed this.Comment,share,vote,follow,read my fanfic reviews book vol.1,if you read teen fiction read my teen fiction reviews book,and if you have a story share it here or message me ;)